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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 84)

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 6:02pm | IP Logged
Baar baar haan
Bolo arnavji haan
Semanti update Kare
Aur Hitashi comment kare

Chale chalo chale chalo?

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 6:08pm | IP Logged

love your concept of writing with semanti...look forward to reading her story

this was a revealtion on the terrace that even I could love :) you anjali is strong and intelligent unlike the one in serial.

 

 

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 6:17pm | IP Logged
loved the ending
and how Anjali found out the truth and got her husband arrested
Anjali wasn't as dumb and clueless here which is greatLOL


Edited by ayshaomar - 18 April 2013 at 7:04pm

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 7:52pm | IP Logged
extremely well wrigten ...different reflection of khushis character...loved it

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Are we there yet????

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Waiting for 8:30!

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I HAD to post the image.

Because what you have done with this story is this: you have managed to recreate that awesome chemistry and romance of the magical moment, AND given us a complete kiss as well!



I absolutely loved this story, for many reasons.

First, this has to be my absolute favorite of all your "Khushis", her spirit, her attitude, her positivity...they were just so well-written!


Second, I love the details you put in about Ice-Hockey (about which I know nothing, much like Khushi here), and their respective college lives and backgrounds.


Third, I love the little details that made this even more special, like the flashback to when he had seen her earlier...


Fourth,  I loved the Payal-turned-Skate scene so very much!


But most of all, thank you for NOT giving us an almost-kiss. 
That part was written beautifully, and the chemistry was spot-on!


The entire story was just so real and I'm sure a lot of us could relate to it on so many levels, after all, who has not faced the perils of an unrequited crush before?
 
Except, it wasn't really unrequited, was it?


I also loved the subtle undertones of humor that ran through the entire tale.

As I write this comment, I am aware that it seems inadequate, somehow.

So let me just say this, you have done a fabulous job here, and this is my favorite piece among all your works so far!





P.S: And now I am scared.
        Terrified, actually.

        How am I supposed to write my next after this delightful tale?








Edited by EXPELLIARMUS - 16 April 2013 at 10:26pm

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