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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 83)

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:12am | IP Logged
simply awesome.loved it

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:15am | IP Logged
Can I just say I totally love you for this ???
Wait I am processing this..I will be back!!!

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:18am | IP Logged
Oh why did it just end here..? I wanted to read what will happen after this... shitt..:||
can you write more on this ..? Plsss...
@juhi waiting for your next tale :D

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:19am | IP Logged
That was a wonderful story with of course a delicious full kiss.. Embarrassed
At the end I had a wide silly smile on my face...
 
Thank you sooo much for this story... Hug

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:22am | IP Logged
LOVED THAT SCENE!! You did such an amazing job on it!! agghhh thank you for writing it! 

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:35am | IP Logged
awesome...
loved it...
thanx 4 d pm...Smile

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:36am | IP Logged
It ws so cute...lvd it!

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:39am | IP Logged


A somersault take on famous/infamous red tinged Diwali kiss. Very nicely written.
 
Subtle connections to the scene like her RED sweatshirt and him tying her skates properly, made this piece endearing.

And speaking of endearing, both Arnav and Khushi were cute to the hilt in this story. Very normal and very human. Their reactions, the reasons that attracted them to each other (specially Arnav's) and the way they handled the kiss was quite realistic. Not to forget beautiful too :)


Are you a sport enthusiast? You had quite some details penned down there about different college teams and the game itself!

Loved it! Shall wait for more from you :)



 

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