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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 78)

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 9:17pm | IP Logged
I tried very hard to come with a smart and intelligent comment in response to this story and i swear my mind is not moving beyond Arnav Singh Raizada as an Ice Hockey Player !!Confused Wink

Kya karun main ???

What a crackling twist to the diwali epic scene with him tieing her laces and the mind blowing kiss!
And of course Khushi is far from being shy with what a brilliant way to prove it.Embarrassed

This one is going to be re read alot of times for sure !




Edited by _disha_ - 16 April 2013 at 9:56pm

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 9:25pm | IP Logged
Absolutely adorable!!

I loved it - a brilliant take on another classic scene...and this time Arnav kisses her and doesn't behave like an idiot. LOL Just so cute - thank you for this!

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 9:26pm | IP Logged
Semanti - Half an hour late - by my clock... buahahahahah!!!!

******

First of all, Arnav playing Canada's game!! Main Khush hoon, obviously!! Loved the touches of authenticity you brought to it!! 

But seriously - it was a pitch perfect interpretation of the Diwali almost kiss and yes, although the sensuality lit up a storm on the screen - the aftermath was just plain cringeworthy. So glad you chose that scene. The minute she put on the boots was when I guessed Diwali scene would follow.. 

Doing a little dhinka chika now... !!



Edited by GirlOfFire - 16 April 2013 at 9:44pm

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 9:33pm | IP Logged
Bilkul theek chee.


Wish it didn't end.

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 9:36pm | IP Logged
Big smile

Beautiful ... just loved reading about the sporty Arnav and the overworked Khushi ... 
and the sensuous kiss  ... 

"If this is heaven, I'm not remotely sorry I died ... " Embarrassed Wink 

Thanks ... 


Edited by Kishmish - 16 April 2013 at 10:18pm

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 9:39pm | IP Logged
Beautifully written..just amazing..

Edited by nishi22 - 16 April 2013 at 10:07pm

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 9:43pm | IP Logged
R.
Edited.

This is such an adorable story and very
off-beat too.

The introduction was great with a
sneak-peek at how she grew up.

Arnav's characterization is Great.

Thanks for the PM.


Edited by greenMoss - 18 April 2013 at 3:25am

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
Oh my goodness that was a wonderfully written OS!! You really know how weave a story dear girl!! Now I am going to re-read this!

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