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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 77)

katunkka Senior Member
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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 10:52pm | IP Logged
ok this has to be the best story!!!!!!!
you concluded everything in one chapter and you answered every question I have now you make me intrigued how the next set of tale is going to be. i'm very excited and my interest is very high right now I like it. very much 
and sorry for the late comment been busy but i'm trying to make up with this fairly long jumbled up thought. but you already know you're awesome so my not commenting as I should, shouldn't fase you. keep up the awesomeness!!!!
I love how arnav fast for khushi this hasn't been done and so creative I believe. why should khushi be the only one to fast for him he should do it too! lol

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
I am so gald you guys are collabing!

I farqing love your writings dammit. 

ps. I cannot resist spamming for the life of me, someone needs to steal my IF password! 

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
1st update really overwhelmed me..!!
i loved how you molded the whole story...
yeah that terrace scene...
i never loved that...
and i'll read the concluding part to know what you actually tried to show..

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 11:05pm | IP Logged
I guessed he would be a Secret Agent.. IB officer comes pretty close. Secret toh tha hi, hai naa? *smirks* Wow, Officer ASR with a gun and a sexy smirk and a stubble, wow ASR just got exponentially more attractive. Embarrassed

This Khushi is awesome, a fighter! This is the quality in Khushi that I always admired and I am glad you highlighted it so beautifully. And your zing to the biggest dushman and gunahgaar of all IPK fans - the god awful terrace MU - brilliant. Twiggy loved it!

But I love this story for Anjali more than anything else... she too is a Raizada afterall. She behaved like a true elder sister - protecting her little brother from all evil. Strong, brave, badass. Mazaa aa gaya

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Milii Goldie
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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 11:21pm | IP Logged
Awesome story!!!
Loved all the characters...especially the strong Anjali...
 
C an't wait to read more of such stories...
 
 

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amv63 Senior Member
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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
Ladies, the term that comes to mind is "short but sweet. And swift". You set a quick, tight pace and I even read it in the same manner LOLRush rush rush as if the next stage in the story would happen before I got to read about it! Honestly. 
Juhi, don't laugh. Semanti doesn't know me still! But I aim to rectify that by embarking on her stories next.
As usual, you set us all on a completely different track with the terrace scene. And then he turns out to be her brother. Clap I like. And he's as much a snake as ever! 
Khushi and Arnav's roles seemed reversed here, with her making the first moves toward him and him resisting. Again, I like how you both have not made her the shy, retiring bhartiya naari who is appalled by her sexual attraction toward her husband. 
And Anjali...she needs more such stories that bring out the inner strength in this seemingly weepy woman. Hopefully Aman will help!
All in all, girls, this was thoroughly enjoyable. Thank you and keep collaborating.

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 11:34pm | IP Logged
This is beautiful ...loved it

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 12:08am | IP Logged
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