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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 76)

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 6:59pm | IP Logged
Anjali the mastermind, I 'm seriously impressed by the level of planning the woman exhibited. Not to mention her loving and protective nature. As for Shyam , well, everyone gets their comeuppance. So Amit and Anjali- any chances of pursuing that angle? I really like how you portrayed Arnav and Khushi as well, and the changing dynamics of their relationship. Waiting to read Semanti's story :)

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 9:07pm | IP Logged
Wow...I loved the twistEmbarrassed
Anjali is not that crying n sobbing type..She is so strongThumbs Up...and I hate ShyamConfused...
Now Arnav was guilt...OMG!! When I read first chapter I thought vice versa...that he might have heard the convo between Khushi n Shyam and misunderstood everything...But I was totally wrongLOL...
Loved the determined Khushi...And lover Arnav...
You guys did a great job...Now waiting for the next story..
A small gift from me ..Chocolate rosesBig smile


Edited by naughtymallu - 15 April 2013 at 9:08pm

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
Hats off to you Juhi for building such a gripping, complete tale in just two chapters. It is no mean feat especially when the story manages to convey itself, all emotions and feeling intact!

And thank you for rounding up the story for all characters involved in the story - it leaves one with a sense of completion.

As always great writing!

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 10:09pm | IP Logged
Interesting concept, I really like it!

The story was also great. You are such a talented writer, I really love your work! Can't wait to read more! And your take on a pivotal scene from the show was really great!

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
Charming story and the honors go to the two gutsy ladies...Anjali and Khushi.  Normally, ASR is larger than life but here the women were larger than life.  Anjali  in recognizing and trapping Shyam and Khushi in the courage she displayed in making her dreams come true.

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 10:27pm | IP Logged
EXPELLIARMUS ,


Disarming charm , is that you do ?  Yes, you are disarming charm by making the non-romantic wands fly away and get charmed by lovely tales of Arshi having the "love" spell getting accentuated with flavours of suspense and intrigue too .. Well done !!!

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 10:47pm | IP Logged
I liked it...very different but nice

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 10:51pm | IP Logged
That was amazing.. Shyam is such a cheat.. Pinch And Arnav actually thought Khushi is with Shyam in all this.. But alls well that ends well.. He is guilty and in love and she knows that...

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