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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 72)

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 4:44am | IP Logged

So Shyam Manohar Jha is the foster brother of Khushi and no love lost between the two. Shyam is all vice rolled in one! Quite an achievement!

Arnav is in the Intelligence. Quite a line for a businessman!

Khushi is in fashion business and makes Arnav keep his promise. Love the turn this terrace confrontation took!! It was between brother sister and was the root cause for clearing the mis understanding by Arnav. Quite opposite from what was shown.

Here due to this he gives her the option of not marrying and take all the nlame.In the serial it was opposite.

In the serial he forces her to marry and here she forces him to marry.

There it was to punish her and not let her go, here it was to make him confess his love for her!

There Khushi succumbs to others. Here she holds her fort.

Anjali once again playing the cupid.

Love this Anjali who is stong and not just a Poojali!

Like the way she takes initiative to collect evidence and inform the intelligence sans her brother.

Loved the way she protected him.

So Aman and Anjali pairing up later! Quite interesting!

Again the terrace revelation was also superb. I had been waiting in the show to do just that and to do so would have been logical.

First it was Shyam and Khushi confrontation, leading to arnav MU, then it was Khushi-Arnav confrontation leading to understanding what her crime was to be punished and I had expected another terrace confrontation Shyam- Arnav, Khushi where the MU was cleared and Shyam being accused by AK duo. That turned out to be just a dream and am glad how you have used those in your story.

Anjali securing her life for herself as well as her rajkumari was fabulous.

Ending with breaking the fast during Karva Chauth and begin their lives with clean slate was good!

Loved this story of yours.

 

 

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 5:06am | IP Logged
The concept was brilliant and Khushi was just such an awesome woman!Awesome  EndingClap

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 5:11am | IP Logged
nice concept yar would love it for sure

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 5:13am | IP Logged
Bm...
Still need to read...

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 5:15am | IP Logged
wow wonderful...
the story has many mysteries ofcourse when u are the writer so has to expect this...
 

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 5:23am | IP Logged
just awesome..
simply superb...
u r just amazing.. pls keep it up dear..
thanks a lot for pm..

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 5:51am | IP Logged
Awesome
Beautiful and lovely update
Update soon please
Thanks for the PM 

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 6:45am | IP Logged
my comments on part1 
juhi wonderful start...i hated tht terrace scene in ipk
and to give that scene a new meaning was brilliant

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