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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 70)

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 10:07am | IP Logged
Maanna padega, tere SHATIR DIMAAGH ko... It can very well compete with Arnav's.. ;)
Your updates never cease to bring a smile to my face( except in Sins).. And for that I LOVE YOU DAMMIT!!!! And u know it too.. :)
Wow, this Anjali is intelligent... She not only realizes her husband is a fraud, but also takes an active part in getting him arrested.. You know how much I love to read about strong independent women.. I don't know why the Indian soaps always make them weak and and spineless... Ittehaas gawah hai, ke hamare Bharat mein kitni shakti shaali mahilaayen thi... But I think the male members of our modern society feel threatened having strong women around them, that's why they insist on making serials depicting women as mardon ki jootiyan.. So I want to thank all the great writers on IF for giving us the asli kahani...
Juhi, this was a great story, I love this Terrace version.. Definitely better than the show.. 

Now I'm eagerly waiting for Semanti's Dhadkanein!!! 

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 10:08am | IP Logged
beautiful endingClap

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 10:15am | IP Logged
Wow amazing loved the secret agent thing going on 
And Anjali's character is much better than the original one not only she found out but she took revenge too and she managed to out smart her Shatir Dimaagh wala bhai
And shyam was her brother ha brilliant twist 
Waiting for Semanti's tale know and i cant wait LOL
Jenny x

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 10:21am | IP Logged
loved it...continue soon

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 10:35am | IP Logged
Ah I guessed right, that Arnav was some sort of agent and
he pursued Khushi to catch Shyam

nice ending fasting for Karva Chauth

wanted Arnav to fast with Khushi for Karva Chauth on IPKKND
but alas that did not happen

at least it happened in you story

thank you

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 10:45am | IP Logged
I loved it... Fast paced n very gripping story that had surprises written all over them... after reading it... i just had one thought "how do you even manage to come up with such amazing twists in the plot???" amazing writing there... everything was unexpected... but outcome as usual so very lovely...i enjoyed reading it a lot... let more tales keep coming... hats off for your zeal to try this concept... it is a more stressful process as it needs more involvement from creative end... you guys are doing amazingly well and we are lucky...

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 10:49am | IP Logged
WOOOW!!! what an ending!! Sachhh!! loved it! 

ohhh anjali is pregnant!! bless her! 

that was awesome Juhi Thumbs Up

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 10:55am | IP Logged
brilliant 2 shot...written very well...

so glad you gave a new meaning to the terrace scene...I guess all of us were tortured by the actual scene on the show, to top it arnav thought about it all the time and did some disturbing acts with khushi...

anjali a strong person...kudos for that...so much better than the shyamji-rani sahiba mush...

arnav being guilty in this is also good factor...becos of the time frame they did not focus much on his guilt or the good times which we cud have seen of ar-hi.


thanks dear...

sri.

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