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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 69)

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 9:10am | IP Logged
Why am I not surprised at how beautifully this was written.
Thats right its because you wrote it.

That was amazing.
LOVED IT.

Thank you for the PM
God bless
Jenna

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 9:11am | IP Logged
What an original twist to the very familiar terrace scene... Loved it...

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 9:13am | IP Logged
Edited my comments on page 54...

Liza

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 9:20am | IP Logged
Wonderful end of a lovely story. Loved the way you tell a tale.

All emotions were portrayed very well , I don't know why to me every thing was clear in first chapter, I wanted some answers off course but was not confused.

Thanks for the PM.

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 9:23am | IP Logged
When you had written in your note that you will start the story with a dialogue you hated, I wondered which.

Ahh the terrace dialogue. Of course, every IPKKNDian should hate the God forsaken dialogue

Moving on you gave a world class twist to the whole story.

Shyam is Khushi's brother and Arnav instead of MUing her about the affair gets his innocence proved on the terrace by that one dialogue.

Like the show here he wants to marry her for ulterior motives.

But our Khushi, the fighter that she is, wants to hold on to and make efforts for the love she has for him and the love she has sensed in him for her.

Arnav is an under cover agent? Shocked Well that makes him only more sexy Embarrassed

I liked how you made Anjali a strong and an independent woman who can not only make decisions for her self but can also influence others' lives in a good way.

Have I missed anything? I am sleepy and my bum aches with all the sitting...

Bye... Smile

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 9:24am | IP Logged
WOW!! So much happened here!! My head is reeling!! In a good way! All the questions were answered and I NEVER thought that this would be the end story...Out of everything what I loved most was the fact that Anjali was a strong woman! She didn't take crap and was smart and protected her brother AND Rajkumari! Kudos to such a woman!! Woman power Zindabad!!!

And also, Arnav's inability to tell Khushi what he feels makes my dhak dhak go faster...because its so adorable...for him actions are everything and I whole heartedly agree!!! :) Thank you for the PM :) I can't wait to read more!! What a WONDERFUL twist to IPKKND.

P.S: There was a time when someone told me that the major twist in IPKKND, the show, would be the fact that Shyam was Khushi's brother.. ROFL!! I laughed myself to the next century and even said that it would be the baap of all twists in Indian Television history!! So glad that supposed spoiler materialized here! :P 

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Addicted87 Goldie
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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 9:54am | IP Logged
Loved both Anjali and Khushi's characters... Two strong women who did not sit back and accept whatever fate threw their way... Khushi fought for the relationship that she needed in her life and won... Anjali did not give up after finding out about her husband's true character... she made sure he got what he deserved... I really wish that Anjali in the show was something like this...
Brilliant updateSmile

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 9:57am | IP Logged
Now I feel I have done a Phd in IPK...how much ever I hated the tracks post July and the catastrophic end ur stories manage to erase the bitter memories...


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