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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 66)

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
That was very well done and neatly wrapped up ...
Liked it , thanks ...and thnx for the pm dear .

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
Awesome as always Juhi!

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
Awesome update. It's clears all the doubts. So Arnav is an agent . He may have persuied her wrong reasons but unknown to him he was in love with her. Khushi loved him too and that's reason enough not to let go of their relationship. She let him choose the pace. Finally he realized his love. Anjali knows about Shyam and Arnav's truth. Loved this strong Anjali. Aman fell for Anjali.

Nice end.

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
Alright alright I'm here now!

I don't believe this. In less than 12 hours, I'm almost on page TWENTY.  I'm so happy that people are taking this so well!

Ab kaam ki baat.

Now everything falls into place and I was right. Big smile The feeling of satisfaction on being able to predict correctly in an Expel-story is ENORMOUS.

That confession of love from Arnav was delightful. Bas bahut dekh liya "I love you damn it"... (which is not to say that we won't cover that), but this was a heartfelt, simple and honest confession that somehow-- in it's simplicity, made up for all the hurt and misunderstanding and guilt that went before.

Uff thank god for Anjali's perception. (although for a moment there I thought that she might turn out to be a secret agent too-- like in Spy Kids where EVERYONE in the family is a spy).
Chalo koi nahi. At least she's sister to one spy and on the verge of hooking up with another one.

Their Karwa Chauth was so cute. I have always believed that if you MUST fast then the least your husband can do is fast as well (unless of course he's diabetic in which case that would be a really bad idea).

Although I personally felt that 'Rajkumari' was misused as much as 'Rani Sahiba' and 'Agar yeh rishta...' on the show, it was used far more meaningfully here. 

The Terrace Theme that ran throughout was masterfully done. The Terrace isn't just for misunderstandings-- it can also signify love and new beginnings. Thank you for distorting the horrible original scene Expel. Now I can very easily imagine other terrace scenes in my mind.

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
i thought both parts were wonderful. i like the idea of twisting the original scenes :)

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 1:25pm | IP Logged
Simply beautiful. That terrace scene in the show haunted me and most of the arshi fans. I thank you for giving us this terrace scene, so I can somewhat replace the horrid memories if that with this beautiful story.

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
Woww very nice dear :) 

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 2:03pm | IP Logged
wow what a story and what an ending... too good and amazing

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