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Polkadots78
Polkadots78 @Polkadots78 Goldie Inactive
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Posted: 11 years ago
Can I just say I totally love you for this ???
Wait I am processing this..I will be back!!!
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SankiPagal
a.vaishnavi @SankiPagal IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh why did it just end here..? I wanted to read what will happen after this... shitt..:||
can you write more on this ..? Plsss...
@juhi waiting for your next tale :D
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Milii
Milii @Milii Goldie
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was a wonderful story with of course a delicious full kiss.. 😳
At the end I had a wide silly smile on my face...
 
Thank you sooo much for this story... 🤗
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angullgrl91
angullgrl91 @angullgrl91 IF-Rockerz Inactive
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Posted: 11 years ago
LOVED THAT SCENE!! You did such an amazing job on it!! agghhh thank you for writing it! 
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dhanyac
Dhanya C Babu @dhanyac IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome...
loved it...
thanx 4 d pm...😊
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Anony_mous
A, Anon, Nony, Anamika :) @Anony_mous Goldie Inactive
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Posted: 11 years ago


A somersault take on famous/infamous red tinged Diwali kiss. Very nicely written.
 
Subtle connections to the scene like her RED sweatshirt and him tying her skates properly, made this piece endearing.

And speaking of endearing, both Arnav and Khushi were cute to the hilt in this story. Very normal and very human. Their reactions, the reasons that attracted them to each other (specially Arnav's) and the way they handled the kiss was quite realistic. Not to forget beautiful too :)


Are you a sport enthusiast? You had quite some details penned down there about different college teams and the game itself!

Loved it! Shall wait for more from you :)



 
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Happy-go-lucky
Jina @Happy-go-lucky Goldie
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is definitely one of the most fulfilling and adorable OSs I've ever had the good fortune to read till date... And it covered all aspects very nicely.
The Diwali scene on the show was really charged, but the outcome, as you said, was heart-wrenching...
Glad that this Arnav didn't go down that path of being a jerk (Well, he had no reason to either) and rather was really a charmer.
And this storyline, of one's crushes crushing her (/his) heart - is so common, that it makes it easy to relate... But glad that Khushi's feelings were returned.
They make one hell of a sweet couple!

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monasha
Monasha @monasha IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 11 years ago
It  was Super Awesome
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ranogill
ranogill @ranogill IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow what a wonderful romantic piece ...firrst crush or may be love
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Suesan
@710617 Suspended
Posted: 11 years ago
A tale in red is an excellent story..
It's quite the arhi tale told in a different setting... Told from Khushis point of view delightful reading... 👏👏
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