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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 63)

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 6:41am | IP Logged
it was beautifull tale...
entirely different from terrace scene...
loved it
thanks for pm

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 6:47am | IP Logged
It was awesome update...you have beautifully described everything...

I loved the strong headed anjali here who has herself investigated...
And yes not forgetting the "never giving up" khushi also 
Fnally shyaam was arrested & arnav claimed his love for khushi.

Beautiful ending.
Will be waiting for moreSmile

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 6:47am | IP Logged
superb update..

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 6:51am | IP Logged
a very  beautiful story.

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 6:54am | IP Logged
nice update

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 6:57am | IP Logged
loved it...

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 7:02am | IP Logged
All the revealations in this chapter fit together like pieces of a puzzle. I liked the way how you used Arnav's regular activities -private phone calls, working on the laptop etc to fit in his job of being an intelligence agent.
The twist was surprising. In the show the terrace scene was the cause for all the problems in Arnav and Khushi's relationship, and made Arnav believe the worst of Khushi.
But in your tale it led to the clearing of all the misunderstandings and lies between them and made Arnav realize that Khushi is innocent.
And for once Anjali was aware of what is happening in her as well as her brother's life and acted like an elder sister.
Loved it Juhi! Smile

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 7:02am | IP Logged
Ok fantastic update
Loved the concept of urs and story line
Really awesome
Waiting for the next tale
Please update soon
Thanks for the pm dear

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