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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 59)

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 7:43am | IP Logged
Just caught up with the first story..

Loved it..

So glad you changed the terrace scene. I hated that scene.
Loved Anjali in this story.

Arnav as a secret agent was just.. Well, it made me breathless!! 

I never would have guessed the answers to all the questions I had in my head after reading the first part..

Awesome writing!!

Thanks for the PM..

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 7:48am | IP Logged
Anjali was the surprise of the tale.  Not only she handled Shyam shrewdly but also helped Arnav and Khushi's relationship.


Very nice.

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 7:57am | IP Logged
Oh my that was just a purfecto ending.

I had to re read it, cause so many things happened in 1 update.

So Shyam was Khush's foster brother. Hmm not bad Juhi, I'm so thankful to you for making him Khushi's bhaiyya.

Oh wow Arnav as an intelligence officer, so cool!

You totally surprised me with the reason of Arnav's marriage with Khushi. Okay I admit, you had always surprised me with 'SCANDALOUS' too.

I really wonder how you come up with such brilliant ideas that blows off my mind.

Anyways Anjali surprised me once again, so strong she's . She really needs a good partner like Aman, who values her not her money and status.

Awee Loved Anjali's trick to get him to the Arnav mode and confess his feelings for Khushi.

Haaye he fasted for her! That was the bestest thing about this tale.

It was truly a happily ever after! Ending was just so amazingly amazing.

Now waiting for the next tale.
Intezaar rahega Semanti ji Wink

thanks for the pm Juhi Hug

Love
J

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 8:00am | IP Logged
Woow! amazing... loved how anjali was strong and did everytn for her husband's to get justice... arnav and khushi amazn! 

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 8:02am | IP Logged
it was fantastic!
i loved it!

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 8:05am | IP Logged
nice update... the second part did clear things ... but i felt ur magic was missing for some reason... but still enjoyed reading it :)

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 8:05am | IP Logged
 Wow a wonderful  story. THe terrace Scene  still hurts me a lot. I have never  seen it the second time.
I always skip that part when I watch the episodes now. It is too painful.

Even when you posted the first part, I was very skeptical and did not read it till you posted the last part.  After reading your story,  I loved it.   You have erased all the bad memories.

Hats off to you. Clap. i am really  not good at writing , but I hope I conveyed  my love for this first story.
  • I loved Arnav as an agent.
  • I loved Shyam as a brother. Thank God. For once.
Want to see a story of Arnav as ASR pursuing Khushi  .


Edited by vks11 - 15 April 2013 at 10:47am

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 8:08am | IP Logged
Juhi :D :)

Absolutely P.E.R.F.E.C.T!!

beautiful modification of the terrace scene :)

i wnt hesitate to sa
y dat dis ws way far better than the original!

both the updates are brilliant..

i love these 2 women-Anjali n Khushi..

i always wanted to c an intelligent , smart , natkhat Anjali with shatir dimag ;) :)

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