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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 58)

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:36am | IP Logged
Loved it. Yeah khushi was right anjali was not as weak as her chotey thought her to be

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:37am | IP Logged
Juhi just read both the parts together...got time to read the 1st part now & by the time I completed with it, I got lucky as u posted the next part ...the first part had left my mind with too many unanswered questions for which u provided an explanation & clarity in the second part...for a change, I was glad to c Anjali being shrewd in sensing matters around her & taking rightful actions in this regard...it was refreshing...bcos it was way different from the Anjali in the show who was always clueless to matters...a really different & good take on the terrace scene with a new dimension to Shyam Khushi relation...foster Bro-Sis that caught me by surprise...I was expecting the usual Shyam lusting over Khushi angle

U made Arnav a secret agent & attributed his constant bluetooth calls & video conferences to the profession...good job Juhi enjoyed ur first tale...waiting for the next one now Smile

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:37am | IP Logged
Ahh so my guess was right.
 Beautiful how Khushi fought for their love against Arnav because her win would mean their win.
What a strong woman Anjali is. Wish she was like this in the show also.

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:37am | IP Logged
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= Part 1 =

The opening paragraphs brought back the memories of the episodes in the show.

But the chapter unfolded a very different story as I read further.

I liked the fact that Khushi was independent.

The fact that Arnav gave in to his desires was very beautifully written.

I felt that Arnav was totally thoughtless to have gone towards the pool side after he made love to Khushi.

Khushi's determination to make this marriage work , was
praise-worthy.


The ending was an interesting cliff-hanger.
The fact that Shyam is Khushi's brother , is very off-beat.

Thanks for the PM.Smile


Edited by greenMoss - 16 April 2013 at 8:45am

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= Part 2=

Arnav trying to make the marriage work was praise-worthy.

The way Arnav apologised to Khushi , Khushi confessed her Love and Arnav couldn't tell it in words but he kissed her.. It was so infinitely sweet and beautiful.

Arnav getting anxious for Khushi was nice to read.

.. And the most wonderful thing in the whole chapter was the confession. Clap

Arnav, as a secret agent, is Awesome.
And he only told Khushi about it.

It was refreshing to read that Anjali is a strong woman.

Aman's perspective about Anjali was great.

Both of the chapters were extremely
well-written. It is a very off-beat take on the terrace scene.

.. And the banner is beautiful.

Thanks for the PM.Smile


Edited by greenMoss - 16 April 2013 at 9:00am

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:38am | IP Logged
Just read this over breakfast quickly.  Only one word, awesome!  Kash our Kushi and Anjali were this strong in the show.  Wish they had spoken so openly instead of keeping secrets under pretense of protecting the others - misunderstanding is when they don't share and don't communicate.  This Kushi made sure that this was not the case.  This gave him a choice an hence the beautiful romance that ensued.  Love it.  Great way to start boring manic Monday!

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:39am | IP Logged
lovely update!!

love anjali...she is not "blind" like in the show...she is a strong woman...i admire her 4 her courage...Smile

khushi knew arnav loves her even before arnav did...LOL...after khushi said that she knew he loved her his reaction was quite funny...


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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:44am | IP Logged
The terrace did play an important role in this TS. Hence, the name chosen was just apt! ... And I really liked how Anjali had been portrayed as the worthy elder sibling here, who looks out for her 'Chotay', and needless to say, I absolutely adored the way Arnav-Khushi worked to save their relationship and how Arnav came to realize his feelings for Khushi... Now, will be waiting for the next installment :)

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