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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 56)

Amanram IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:20am | IP Logged

very very good. thoroughly enjoyed this first instalment of your project. Aman and Arnav as agents - just too good and yeah loved the not spineless Anjali in this one - just like elder siblings should be and what to say of khushi - she just kicks ass doesn't she!! Just lovelyClapClapClapClap



Edited by Amanram - 16 April 2013 at 12:12am

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:21am | IP Logged
Wooohoo Anjali! Khushi is a good judge of character.

Aww, Poor Arnav,everyone seems to know about everthing while he gets left behind to deal with his guilt!

Is Aman Arnav's equal/boss? I like that!

Again, the James Bond/Gun/Secret Agent bit made me so happy! Yeah!

Can't wait to read the next story! :D

The Terrace bit reminded me of this Tagore story I read once, where the POV is from the  River Steps.


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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:24am | IP Logged
This update update revelation right?//
Brother a foster brother...first shock
she saw guilt in his eyes ... that not because he fall in love with her its only because he thought that she deserve best not him and he thought that he is not like her... actuallly he was head over heels in love with her... what if Ipk has same twist .It will be wow...day dreaming
Anjali shock another shock.. thank God you at least you reveal foster brother that time otherwise we can't digest all these things together...and you know I was actually confused why you reveal about brother that time and I got answer now...
Star this belongs to you for this update. Amazing mind blowing superb speechless etc won't never ever suit this update some thing more than that...
When his brother tried to save her life she was doing the same... 
Why Shyam run away???? of course its not his story...what if Anjali marry aman in front of him and for you Raj kumari wow
Uper se uper update



Edited by riafna - 15 April 2013 at 6:07am

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vandana.sagar

Absolutely amazing, everything fit in so perfectly like a puzzle! I can never have enough of Arnav and Khushi, they are just perfectly immortalise in my life! 
Love this brave Anjali too, the concept was brilliant and your Khushi was just such an awesome woman! Loved it! 



awesome chapter

explains everything...

can't wait for the next story Clap

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:26am | IP Logged
Big smile

Awesome ... loved the importance of the terrace in this story ... 
Agent Raizada ... Day Dreaming sounds so good ... 

Khushi discovering that Arnav had a dual life was a shock ... 
suspecting her of fraud along with her brother ... 

but love triumphed over all else ... 

Loved Anjali in this story ... she had a backbone ... 
she stood up for what was right ... 
the one in the show had blinkers on and was too weak ... 

Agent Aman was the cutest ... falling in love with Anjali without ever having seen her ... LOL

"How could someone fall in love with a woman whose voice was his only link to her?" 

Thanks ... Loved this one ... 



Edited by Kishmish - 15 April 2013 at 6:03am

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:29am | IP Logged
That was Fantabulous Juhi Di!!!!
I dont knw if I have said this before... but I love the way u portray Anjali as a strong women in all of ur stories rather than a weakling or Dumbo...
And Arshi... Do I need to say that you are best at it??
You are right Di... some emotions dont need words, they just need to be felt and realized.
And Arnav!!! A secret Agent... Whoa.. that would be cool.
Right now I am imagining Mr. Sobti in a white short, blue Denim and a holster and *faints*

Bas... I am Awestruck!!!

Loads of Love...
Yashi

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:29am | IP Logged
The Terrace a place for new beginnings 

Arnav poor thing but then he has two strong ladies by his side

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:30am | IP Logged
So ... I was right !! Arnav befriended Khushi to find out about Shyam!
 
Great Anji!

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