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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 55)

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:01am | IP Logged
Absolutely amazing, everything fit in so perfectly like a puzzle! I can never have enough of Arnav and Khushi, they are just perfectly immortalise in my life! 
Love this brave Anjali too, the concept was brilliant and your Khushi was just such an awesome woman! Loved it! 

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:03am | IP Logged
wow
that was awesome

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:05am | IP Logged
This is jyst beautiful :D Can;t waait for Semanit's :)

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:10am | IP Logged
Hey!
 
Thanks for the PM.
 
Well-written.
 
Nothing like how I had imagined this update would turn out like ... this was better than how I had imagined it to be.
 
Hats off to you. Amazing! ClapClapClap Always refreshing to read what you write.

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:13am | IP Logged
Wonderful!Clap

A guileless Anjali, a deceitful Shyam but with a different flavor.

And I just loved the way you used the terrace dialogue...same words same meaning as well but owing to the different dynamics of the relation between Khushi and Shyam; this makes for a gripping read.

Add to it the fact that the everything is warped in a tale of suspicion...Khushi keeping an eye on Shyam, Arnav keeping an eye on Shyam as well and pursuing Khushi just to make his job of knowing the real Shyam easy and Khushi's realization of the latter part. 

As I said in my earlier comment, I trad along you update cautiously since I know there's something you might spring upon the readers at the last moment. And my assumption stood true in the form of agent Aman Mathur and Anjali (ok I have to admit that I'd expected the woman on the other end of the line to be Khushi at first; hence the comment about a guileless Anjali at the beginning of the comment). It felt good to know that she isn't naive after all. 

How could someone fall in love with a woman whose voice was his only link to her?
A simple sentence yet so potent. Embarrassed

It was a completion of circle with the tale beginning at the terrace and ending st the same place. Needless to say...I loved this one!Big smile


Edited by Eccentrica - 15 April 2013 at 5:34am

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:15am | IP Logged
Awesum...
Really Loved It...

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:16am | IP Logged
simply brilliant.loved it;

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:19am | IP Logged
That was great !
A perfect ending
Waiting for the next one

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