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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 45)

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 5:13pm | IP Logged
As usual beautifully written! Like the concept. It's very different. So much to reveal. I wonder what arnavs job is. Im thinking undercover police maybe because of the shoulder strap or something really dark. But don't want to go down that path.

Roles are changed here. Khushi is the one that forced him to get married.

So Shyam is khushis brother! Will be waitin for part 2.

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 5:15pm | IP Logged
it was amazing
u twisted pretty well
first I thought it was same terrace scene
 but like always u did other way around 
eager to find out the reason behind his behavior
loved itSmile

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 5:48pm | IP Logged
great

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 6:13pm | IP Logged
wow ...wasn't expecting this...surprised...great start...keep it up...

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 6:18pm | IP Logged
That was great. Looking forward to the answers in the next update. 

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 6:30pm | IP Logged
Wow, what a start... Left me with a hundred different questions. Confused Please update soon, looks like Arnav is with CBI with his shoulder bolster & everything... Shyam is Khushi's brother?!?!?

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 6:42pm | IP Logged
wow. good story. very well written.

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 6:57pm | IP Logged
In so many ways I wish the Kushi had actually put her foot down and fought with Arnav...and stupid Arnav instead of torturing everyone around him and himself had just laid out the truth in plain words so much heartache could have been avoided.

I like your different take on the outcome of the scene..yes there are questions arising especially the last part...but will wait for the next part.

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