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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 43)

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
Sometimes I think if Juhi was the writer of IPKKND, then what could happen? Sigh! how can you write so damn awesome story on ArHi? Plz don't stop writing! This is the only way still we can feel ArHi and their love.


Shyam is her brother! woww! You gave me a little heart attack!

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 1:25pm | IP Logged
amazing as usual. I really loved your take on the terrace scene. I also hated that dialogue from the show. There are still a lot of things I'm confused about, but I'm sure everything will become clear in the next part! Can't wait to read it!

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
SMJ - brother? Haha! And you didn't let us know until the end. Clever, clever. 
But what is Arnav's problem? She has already told him, no? That SMJ is nothing to her.  And his other job, is he  CIA under cover cop? That's quite dangerous, and he knows that, since he is carrying a gun. So then why the hell is he wasting time? I mean he could die in the line of fire. Or she could die, of anything! His "other" job should have given him a more than enough inkling on how short life can be! He really needs to prioritize!
Thanks for the PM. Eager to find out what will happen next.

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
First of all , it's a beautiful piece of work ...Khushi , as you've shown her , is just amazingly forthright and strong and determined ...and she loves him , that's a lethal combination and who is Mr.Raizada  to resist ...
Secondly , have you ever thought of dabbling in whodunit stuff at all ...'cause you certainly have the gift for it ...LOL I am serious ! And I admit to being taken totally by surprise ...every time !  

I now remember the speculations at the time of him being her bro , one of the many theories being tossed in the air .and I too hated the whole terrace fiasco , never actually watched the whole thing ...it made me nauseous ...

I am sort of on edge to see how you finish this ...

Thnx for the pm dear .



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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
Nice update..i have so many question in my mind that i m feeling like a question bank..update soon

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
awsome concept...

loved the first part...

had a lot of suspense in it...

eagerly waiting for the next part...

thanks for pm juhi...

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
shyam is khushi's brother, loved the story, but there are some parts quite unclear, will wait to readthe concludingpart.

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 2:05pm | IP Logged

Oky that tale leave me with so many question

 

when arnav saw them at terrace he knows that she\s shyam sister and 

then why he not to marry her?

if he get to know later then why all this

why he's end their moment like this 

I love this khushi…she' to strong u know want to fight for her own life because she knows what she actually want in her life

That's the spirit girl

I want next part asap please 

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