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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 37)

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 8:11am | IP Logged
Brilliant and amazing start, what a dhamaka update. From start to finish it was written brilliantly, loving the concept of the story, At the start i thought it was going towards the forced marriage way, but when he did still marry her i know there was a different bombshell to come and it turned out shyam is here brother, absolutely fantastic story line. So Arnav has got a different job, is he a policeman or a undercover investigator and shyam could be a criminal that's the reason Khushi told him to leave Anjali. Loved the passion and intensity between Arnav and Khushi, it was written so beautifully. Khushi's character was fantastic so strong and confident and did not give up on Arnav. Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx 

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 8:13am | IP Logged

Amazing Amazing start...amazingly written...

A new plot and new outcome of the terrace scene...Arnav as usual jumping to conclusions...

Arnav is a police officer...wow...glad that Khushi is independent in your story and Anjali too...

In the end...Paaun ke neeche se Zameen khisak gai...Wow...what a twist...Mindblowing...What a dhamaka...

So Shyam is Khushi's brother and Anjali is her bhabhi...

What a cliffhanger...So waiting for more...Plz update very soon...

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 8:20am | IP Logged
great start from from d terrace scene.
here we can c kushi is bold n not crying baby.
what abt arnav job?
why cant he accept her.is there any past.
ending surprised me abt knowing shyaam is her brother.
loved it
thanks for pm

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 8:28am | IP Logged
it was sooo good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
u brought such a change in the story..!!
w8ng for next!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 8:42am | IP Logged
Fabulous Smile cant wait for the next part Smile

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 8:43am | IP Logged
Awesome..
I didnt expect shyam as khushi's bro... i knw there will bmany twists... cant wait to read more.. continue soon

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 8:47am | IP Logged
This is awesome yaar...

so good ..

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 8:49am | IP Logged
amazingly written but m hell confused...a storm of questions brewing up in my mind...so m waiting for the next part...a whole new version of terrace tale and the brother part was least expected...i arnav some sorta agent...

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