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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 33)

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 8:00am | IP Logged
Eee, brother?!?! :O 
This was amazing. ^_^ I can't wait till the next chapter. :D 

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 8:00am | IP Logged
Loved this Kushi who fought for what she wants and for them because she felt his inner struggles.  Loved how he gave her a choice about the wedding.  What exactly is Shyam Manohar Jha up to?  I always hated that scene as it crashed the happy bubble many IPK fans were in during Payash wedding.  I so felt for ASR watching his face go from happy to sad to mad.  Can't wait for part 2.  Btw loved the undercover officer alias.  

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 8:02am | IP Logged
Very nice! Great start.. This is an interesting twist to the terrace scene!!!

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 8:05am | IP Logged
Loved it ...that was something different...
Khushi and Shyam are siblings ...didn't guess at all
waiting for next chapterSmile

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 8:07am | IP Logged
I will wait   to read both the parts together and then will post my comment.

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 8:11am | IP Logged
Brilliant and amazing start, what a dhamaka update. From start to finish it was written brilliantly, loving the concept of the story, At the start i thought it was going towards the forced marriage way, but when he did still marry her i know there was a different bombshell to come and it turned out shyam is here brother, absolutely fantastic story line. So Arnav has got a different job, is he a policeman or a undercover investigator and shyam could be a criminal that's the reason Khushi told him to leave Anjali. Loved the passion and intensity between Arnav and Khushi, it was written so beautifully. Khushi's character was fantastic so strong and confident and did not give up on Arnav. Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx 

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 8:13am | IP Logged

Amazing Amazing start...amazingly written...

A new plot and new outcome of the terrace scene...Arnav as usual jumping to conclusions...

Arnav is a police officer...wow...glad that Khushi is independent in your story and Anjali too...

In the end...Paaun ke neeche se Zameen khisak gai...Wow...what a twist...Mindblowing...What a dhamaka...

So Shyam is Khushi's brother and Anjali is her bhabhi...

What a cliffhanger...So waiting for more...Plz update very soon...

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 8:20am | IP Logged
great start from from d terrace scene.
here we can c kushi is bold n not crying baby.
what abt arnav job?
why cant he accept her.is there any past.
ending surprised me abt knowing shyaam is her brother.
loved it
thanks for pm

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