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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 31)

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 5:00am | IP Logged
Just when I think this tale resembles the show and you are trying to change what happened after the terrace scene kahaani mein twist! Shocked
Many things surprised me in this story.
1.Anjali's 24 hour obsession is not only puja. She is a business woman too.
2.Arnav works in the police/detective department or some sort of agency like RAW
3.Khushi insisted on the marriage and Arnav did not even want the marriage.
As always you've left us on a cliffhanger Juhi.There are a lot of questions running in my mind.But I will wait for the second part for the answers to them. Smile

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 5:00am | IP Logged
Shyam is Kushi's brother. Then why Arnav refused to marry Kushi.
ConfusedConfused

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 5:06am | IP Logged
a lovely beginning to the series... the thought of arnav being an officer of the law [I think] is interesting... did he get closer to khushi so as to be able to gather info about shyam's dealings... am eagerly awaiting the unravelling of various unanswered questions here, including why she was telling her brother to leave anjali... looks like she guessed shyam had betrayed his wife in some manner, and was taking him to task... nice to see that arnav realised he had misjudged khushi, so so decided to come clean to her and not marry her on false pretences... liked the fact that you made khushi a successful career woman in her own right who doesn't hesitate to face life's shocks head-on and who's willing to fight for what she strongly believes in! the ever-present passion flaring between khushi and arnav reminds one of their equation in the show! touchin to see her fighting for her marriage, while trying to hide her insecurities and fears... also glad that anjali is a woman of substance, too!

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 5:07am | IP Logged
Was waiting for ur update...Big smile
Nice start...
Iam confusedOuch...
What happened to Arnav?
Why did he want to call of the wedding if he loved Khushi?
and What happened to Shyam?
Shyam is Khushi's brother?

Loved Khushi here...She is stubborn and firm..She don't wanna give up...
Loved the passion...the desire..the need they have for each other...
Superb story..Waiting for the next partBig smile

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 5:09am | IP Logged
I love this new idea you have! All the best for it :) I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 5:11am | IP Logged
love this new concept
 
n the 1st story is so promising
that i know i'm really gonna enjoy reading all the stories
 
cont. asap

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 5:14am | IP Logged
First i thought it was like same as Shyam wants to marry khushi...
Then Arnav and khushi were seeing each other and engaged, built my confusion...
then the confusion built more knowing that Khushi was alone in the world then how the hell does she knows Shyam...
then Arnav wanted to called off the wedding, but khushi was adamant to marry him so they married...
And then his another carrier which is hidden to the family even being a business man...
Is he some kind of under cover officer??
And was he first using Khushi to extract some info???
And the Confusion built 10 fold wen he said Shyam is her Brother...
O God its so confusing but Brilliant update... please update soon to reduce my confusion... hehe

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 5:15am | IP Logged
simply brilliant.loved it

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