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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 27)

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:52am | IP Logged
I am addicted already!...what a twist...!..bravo!

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:53am | IP Logged
great start! Can't wait to read more! 

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:58am | IP Logged
omg!!!Shocked shyam's her brother????
then what is his anger all about???!
cant wait for the next part...loved iit!

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:59am | IP Logged
Amazing!!!

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:59am | IP Logged
Oh my god what a wonderful start with a bang.

Love this bold Khushi who knows exactly what she wants and is going after it as well with single minded determination.

Shyam is Khushi's brother now that concept never in my wildest dream entered my mind, I tell you I have got wild imagination.

So I guess we have got Arnav who works in some sort of secret service as he has a gun ohhh that's so exciting to even think about it's a shame he is not in a uniform as well now that will be hot beyond imagination.

She actually seduced him, me like that a lot. Though did not take a lot of effort on her part, the question is why did she have to do that? Why Arnav is trying to avoid Khushi?

Lots of confusions and lots of answers will have to wait patiently for the next update.

Beutifully written as always.

Thank you for PM.

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 4:07am | IP Logged
Unres my comments on Page 25

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 4:09am | IP Logged

Beautifully Written!

Loved the way you have flipped it entirely.Khushi being independent woman running boutique store,Anjali too established in field.Shyam the pervert in show ,but here he is Khushi's bro.Is Arnav a spy?Liked the way you have twisted,and spiced the plot .


Eager to know why Khushi dislikes Shyam?What happened after terrace part ..Cant wait for next Update:D

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 4:09am | IP Logged
Whoa. Isse kehte hain kahaani mein twist. So I guess Arnie is a secret service agent/CBI officer and Shyam is a wanted criminal. I'll wait for you to answer my one thousand and twenty questions in the next part :P Good job, Juhi.
P.S IDK if I've mentioned this already, but I really like this concept. :)

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