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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 26)

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:33am | IP Logged
Wow.. It was breath takin.. A very gripping story.. But as always all ur stories r gripping n lovely..

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:35am | IP Logged
That was unexpected
Shyam is khushi's brother? Interesting

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:35am | IP Logged
what to say ..
I am really stunned ..

waiting for the next update..

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:36am | IP Logged
Omg this is so good!
I can't wait to read more.

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:43am | IP Logged
Awesome one.

The terrace scene.!!!!!!

Shyaam her brother? And what was all happening. I am confused. 
Wanna read next sooon

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:45am | IP Logged
Res;)



From the beginning of the story, I felt like I was being sucked into a whirlpool of mysteries.. Which kept on sucking me deeper and deeper into it, as I kept reading.. Maanna padega Juhi tujhe... Tusi great ho.. You have definitely chosen the right scene from IPK... The terrace scene was a sore point for me too.. Mother of all evil, or misunderstandings, between Arnav and Khushi... Tune, yeh topic ched kar, mere dil ko thandak pohchaadi.. Though ,now, I'm still a confused mass of protoplasm;), I still have hope, that you've planned something great for it, to turn this dil ko chubhaane wala kaanta event, into something remarkable... 
What is the other thing, which was subtly hinted at in the story??? It sounds like he is an undercover agent for the CBI, or something.. But whatever it is, add the title of "suspense ki Rani" to ur long reigning "Queen of cliffhangers".. 
You know what else I liked here??? That you've made Khushi strong, and independent... She is not being swayed against her will by family pressure and emotional blackmail... She has a strong personality, and does what feels right to her.. What to do, I'm a sucker for strong willed women!!!!! :)
Saala, Shyam ko Khushi ka bhai banadiya??? Aur phir bhi MU??? Ee kaa baat huwi... Find out kareka padi!!!!
Ab baar baar sunte huwe tujhe achcha lagta hai na??? Yeah, yeah, we all know and acknowledge it... U're the best!!! ;)
And this story has two great writers... What more could a reader ask for!!!! 
Semanti, chal jaldi se apna jaadu tu bhi chalade...;)



Edited by Denaid - 13 April 2013 at 6:12am

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:50am | IP Logged
Awesum...i m realy w8ng 4 u guys to post now...gr8 idea juhi n semanti...kudos!

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:52am | IP Logged
Hain what the
So Shyam is her brother
And she wanted him to leave his wife
But why is it because he did something bad
Wow loved the twit of the terrace scene
Though if am being truthful your terrace scene makes more sense than show one dear
So they are married but he was still trying to get away from her
What exactly did he tell her that she was adamant in not marrying her
Or was there some secret
Whats going on I wonder
So what exactly does Arnie do
Cause he ain't a businessman here for sure
Well it seems that anji aint that weak thing she was in the show
But of course Arnie doesnt believe that
So finally they have consummated their marriage
But there is something going on
But what that keeps making him pull away from her every time
And khushi is tired of fighting it out with him
Well am sure the concluding part shall clear it all
Cheers for pm

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