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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 25)

applesauce. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 4:09am | IP Logged

Beautifully Written!

Loved the way you have flipped it entirely.Khushi being independent woman running boutique store,Anjali too established in field.Shyam the pervert in show ,but here he is Khushi's bro.Is Arnav a spy?Liked the way you have twisted,and spiced the plot .

Eager to know why Khushi dislikes Shyam?What happened after terrace part ..Cant wait for next Update:D

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SS88 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 4:09am | IP Logged
Whoa. Isse kehte hain kahaani mein twist. So I guess Arnie is a secret service agent/CBI officer and Shyam is a wanted criminal. I'll wait for you to answer my one thousand and twenty questions in the next part :P Good job, Juhi.
P.S IDK if I've mentioned this already, but I really like this concept. :)

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akaps Goldie

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 4:10am | IP Logged
Left us at the cliffhanger?????  I am really confused.  But what I understood is this much  :

To the world and his family Arnav is the heir to Raizada business, but he also has another job not known to anyone.   To fulfill that job he befriended khushi and proposed her within a short span of time.  Khushi accepted the proposal without really knowing him properly as she has fallen in love with him.  This love leads her to marry him inspite of  his declaring that he had courted her due to some motive.

Still confused about Shyam and Anjali after knowing that Shyam is Khushi's brother?

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Hot_Chocolate IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 4:11am | IP Logged
 if i say that i am speechless that would be an understatement...!!Embarrassed

okay...lemme use my advocate's brain here...!!Shocked

the facts i found are that khushi and arnav are seeing each other...khushi loves arnav that too very much...they are engaged...from two weeks...then arnav found khushi on terrace wid someone whom he didnt like and kinda shocked after seeing them...arnav is hiding something about himself from his family which khushi knows now...he tell her to call off the wedding...but khushi wants to marry her...there is extreme passion between both them...they cant resist each other...well...arnav is trying but he lost it...and then khushi confronts arnav about that terrace night and we gotta know that the person is SHYAM MANOHAR JHA...anjali's husband,,,,and khushi's brother...and khushi hate him like hell... he ran away and is missing from last seven days,,,i donn know why...anjali doesnot know anything...but arnav know and khushi also more thing i found about  arnav extra  career which he is hiding...HE IS A COP...right...????Wink

ohh such a crap comment...isse abb tak ka sabse bakwaas comment ka award milna chahiye...!!LOL
superb update juhi di...i loved it...seriously...aap hit ho...!!!ClapClapClap
such a superb story...u sach me play wid my mind here...!!Thumbs Up

Edited by avantisharma - 13 April 2013 at 8:59am

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LondonChick IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 4:13am | IP Logged
I am very confused but I know you mst have planned a dhamakedar ending to this. Cant wait to read it. Thanks for the PM
God bless

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nazca IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 4:15am | IP Logged
Juhi, what to say about your writing. As usual nothing because your every update will leave me dumbstruck.

Is it possible to think that shifting of one thing to other in
a fraction of second like doubting, loving, hating, clearing, revealing, reliving, ... Yes it is possible. Your one chapter can make to travel all sorts of emotions.

Yes terrace scene is one of the initial of bad scenes in the show. But what she is said is not bad what the way he understood is bad. The decision made with the information of tits and bits will always be haste. Misunderstanding is always a scar which is made by the deep wound, if it is cleared and healed also the scar is a scar. It will remain there and sometimes sure it will haunt like a hell.

Thanks for starting the series. With loads and lots of love will wait for the next chapter.

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allegro IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 4:16am | IP Logged
Awesome update.
A totally unexpected turn. Shyam is Khushi's brother? Ermm
Still a little confused. 
Continue soon.
Thanks for the PM.

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Kishmish IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 4:17am | IP Logged
Big smile  waiting to read it ... 

Loved her persistence and the dialogue ...     

"You can deny, you can run, and you can hide all you want. Lekin aapko faraq padhta hai, and I'll prove that very soon."

taking her to heaven and then dropping her hard on earth ... Ouch
The last line was a shocker ... 
Shyam is her brother ???!!! Shocked

Thanks ... Loving the story ... 

Edited by Kishmish - 13 April 2013 at 10:49am

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