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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 163)

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Posted: 28 September 2013 at 8:51pm | IP Logged
Oh damn I read "The tale In Red" and this could easily be my favorite, because it made me so so nostalgic. Yes, because it is very similar to my story when I came to US to study for Masters. I did work in a cafeteria and did number of internships and crazy jobs in summer to make up for living expenses. My school also had a pretty famous ice hockey team, we would all go to watch the games, cheer them on, ofcourse on a beautiful beautiful ice rink. I had never tried hockey, so me and my boyfriend (my now husband) had tried it once, and though we didnt have quite this kind of romantic moment, as there were many others around us, but we did have some hilarious moments, of falling on each other, trying to save each other, failing miserably, to finally taking a step or two without support on the rink. LOL :P

Oh the story was just beautiful. Especially the kiss. Oh the kiss. You're right, the kiss did frustrate me too. There was so much electricity in the moments leading up to it, and after it, it just fell flat, with the rejection and all. I mean how can one neglect a moment as trademark as that. Anyway, so I am glad you recreated that kiss, and infinitely better than it had been. And I was pleasantly surprised that Khushi did not act shy, in fact she embraced the opportunity of getting back for the little bite on lips. :) Perfect.

Loved, loved it! Definitely one of my favorite tales!


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Road and Raindrops - It was sizzling, their chemistry, the stolen glances, the kisses, all of it very well written, it made me imagine quite vividly. I was also always fascinated by the role reversal characteristics, while watching the serial, I would constantly think, what if Khushi had done the same with Arnav, etc. So when Max wrote If I were you, I was quite happy. And now this. I love how you made her anti-marriage, and quite ambitious. Love how she leaves Arnav impressed by all of it. 
Awww and the rain hug - absolutely beautiful recreation of the actual scene. 

I dont know if I have told you before - but you write conversations quite well, I mean just the right thing to say at the right time, like this 

"Is that why you came back? Because you found out who I was?"

"No. That was why I left. Because you didn't trust me enough to tell me the truth."


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Posted: 02 January 2014 at 12:04am | IP Logged
A Terrace Tale:
very cute storySmile i loved itTongue

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A Tale In Red:

rocking story!!!!Smile though i dont know anything about ice-skating, whenevr i come across stories with such type of games, i feel like i am in a dreamlandSmile absolutely loved the storyTongue

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A Tale of Roads and Raindrops:

very romantic story!!!!!Smile  this series is quite interestingTongue can't wait 2 read moreWink

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Oh my, i have discovered a trunk full of...JALEBIS! And now, i am gonna devour this. I love both of you guys' work! Looking forward to this! Jackpot!

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