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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 160)

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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
Okay!

..This is going to be pretty looong! I need your patience but kya karu.. I have a lot to say.. eerrr.. write! Wink

A TERRACE TALE 
Frankly, I never thought of anything even close to that! Shyaam's being Khushi's brother and that too a criminal.. not that I am complaining! Big smile Arnav Singh Raizada! he has a new profession here! an Intelligence Agent! *applauses* I mean.. yess! it matches his persona sooo well! Yayy!! Thumbs Up 

Anjali was way better here! I mean i really love this lady! but in the serial she was so dependent over everyone! good one girl! Smile 

and the confessions! Khushiii.. you stole this tale for me! Heart yeah! I equally love Arnav but you were so determined about your marriage that I feel proud! 
I really liked this tale dear! it was like a fresh air to me! and yeah! the best part was.. Shyaam was Khushi's brother.. haha! LOL LOL

A TALE IN RED
Semaaantiii.. yeah! that's how I'll call you Tongue Wink ! I mean.. seriously! Havard University for the couple! Embarrassed Dancing  waaaooo yaar! I mean.. imagining Arnav there is like..normal! but Khushi too! great! Clap and I really like the characterization of Khushi in this update dear! she's a lot more stronger, intelligent and because she's living in a foriegn land! she looks more prettier to me with all those over-coats and caps! Wink LOL haha!

I loved the scene where Arnav's teaching her Skating! read it twice! Wink he looks adorable to me there! Smile 

and "
Alright Khushi, let's see you run away now" 
haha! LOL LOL This line clearly defines our Arnav! Wink all the conversation there was fun to read!  and the KISS! aww! Embarrassed it was very well-written! 
..you writers are amazing!  Keep up the good work! Clap Heart


PS- i'll write more a li'l later! biiee! Smile


Edited by ShrutiPandey - 09 May 2013 at 12:13pm

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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 1:59pm | IP Logged
A Tale In Red :
Very cute story.
Loved the kissing part and the climax.
Actually whole Arshi moment was awww.
Thnx dear.
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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 9:37pm | IP Logged
There is something about reading "a tale of roads and raindrops" while watching the rain..listening to kishore kumar and well drinking coffee (pretending its hot chocolate!). 

Also it reminds me of Jab we met..now that I think about it. 

Thank you a million times. 


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Posted: 11 May 2013 at 12:24am | IP Logged
A Tale Of Road And Raindrops : (Part 1 & Part 2)
Lovely story.
I loved it when Arnav smartedly had glimpse of Khushi when they exchange their seats.
And also loved the concept of sweet tooth.
Aww Khushi in red shalwar kameez, Arnavs fav color.
LOL sugar grains in petrol tank, amazed me.
Ahh I enjoyed it.
Still drooling. Wink
Thanks.

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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 4:28pm | IP Logged
a terrace tale:
i love this anjali.. a much more realistic take and shes stronger too. that was something i always hated in the show, how anjali was portrayed as a weak woman completely blind to her husbands faults. 

as for arnav and khushi, the ending was just beautiful. and youre right some emotions dont need words.. and love is one of them.

thank you for a beautiful story. 


Edited by srujie - 16 May 2013 at 4:28pm

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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 4:36pm | IP Logged
a tale in red:

love how he fell in love with her laugh.. thats the epitome of khushi.

her complete lack of knowledge which he sees right through.. something i can relate to completely.

and then the kiss. after that diwali scene, this was very much needed. 

thank youu 

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Posted: 20 May 2013 at 10:49am | IP Logged
Ohooo something different is cookimg here heheheh lolz

I just voted on ff awards and was reading the list to see the sweeto famous writers so that I can read more romantic struk ffs...heheh and here I am ...lolzzz will start reading it asap and will comment again...

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Posted: 20 May 2013 at 11:46am | IP Logged
.wowww ...the terrace tale is awesome...,,

Mujhe lagta hai ki ipkknd ke writers ko nikaal ke sab india forums ke writers ko hire karlena chahiye ...one episode one person...heheh it would have been fun and refreshing story in each epi...par kya karein...They try nothing new ..pheww but one thimg to priase star plus that is ipkknd ...hahah lolzzz

Keep writing and i will read the next tale till then will catch up soon...

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