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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 155)

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 1:21am | IP Logged
Loved the roadtrip n the entire convo betweeen arshi...it was a beautiful tale

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 3:26am | IP Logged
Very well written..Smile

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 6:14am | IP Logged
really really reaallly loved it it was awesome,two parts r very lovly and mind blowing .loved it,continue soon.

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 8:30am | IP Logged
nice Smile

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 9:44am | IP Logged
M SORRY I AM TOO LATE TO COMMENT ON TAIL OF RED AND RAINDRROPS.. BUT SUCH A BEAUTIFUL STORY..
ENTIRE SCENARIO OF THEIR TRIP,THEIR CHARACTER REVERSAL,THE HUG SCENE,THE AIRPORT SCENE (i have a special inclination towards these departure scenes lol)
the surprise at the end...SUGAR GRAINS IN THE FUEL TANK LOLZZZ

OVER ALL A GREAT UPDATE..
YOU ARE SUCH A BLESSED WRITER MASHALLAH 

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
Another awesome FF..luvng it !!

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 1:16pm | IP Logged

Loved it! 

Loved the way the story started with Khushi's sisters wedding..just like in the show..

Loved the way you interchanged Arnav and Khushi's personalities in this story..

The Arnav Singh Raizada..a millionaire..deciding to come out of his shell to appreciate the small things in life..enjoying the rain..becoming all poetic..

Whilst Khushi..frustrated with clutter and dirt..a complete 'akdu' businesswoman..aaand diabetic..and someone who hasn't moved on after her parents' divorce..not believing in marriage..

Loved the Napa Valley drive..really brought back good memories of the Nainital trip..

"Ek ladki bheegi bhaagi si...
Soyi raaton mein jaagi si...
Mili ek ajnabi se, koi aage na peeche.,
Tum hi kaho yeh koi baat hai..."

I could imagine Arnav smirking at the coincidence..
And this "isn't it fascinating how the wipers and raindrops seem to battle each other for supremacy?" So unlike Arnav..but I loved the imagery you used Smile

And the possessiveness he held for the woman he had not known for long..what he said..that was just epic! "He wanted to touch you. And that was enough."

They were both reluctant in going away from each other..Khushi becoming quiet for the last miles of the journey..and Arnav's restlessness..
Then the realization dawning upon him that they don't even know each other's names..
Seeing a fleck of red, thinking it was his imagination..and then the rain hug scene!! That is one scene that I'll never forget..one of the fondest memories of IPK..

You described these 2 scenes beautifully - the roadtrip and rain hug.

Loved these lines..
"Do you always expend so much energy on figuring out which perfume a stranger wears?"
"Not every stranger. Just you."

"Do you always kiss strange men with such uninhibited passion?"
"Not all strange men."

Day Dreaming Day Dreaming

Loved what Arnav said - "Not for long" when Khushi told him her full name..
That was a pretty quick decision.. Wink

So all that was Aman's plan!! He put sugar grains in the fuel tank LOL
And by the way, as always I was expecting a Shyam..but as always you surprised me..

It was a good plan plotted by Aman..well it did have loopholes LOL but his judgement was really spot on!

Loved it!! 

Looking forward to Semanti's story Smile

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
Loved it...
Thanks for this take of terrace scene... Its one the world's most abused TV scene...

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