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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 152)

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 12:07am | IP Logged
Oh goodness gracious!!!! You're making me take the next flight to California and wait for my Arnav to stroll along! 

This was such a beautiful story. Two unknown souls, both lost in their own web of life, fell foe each other in a journey. A journey that lasted a lifetime. 

I loved how you gave a new personality to Khushi, she is not the same immature, loud girl, in fact she has seen the worst of her childhood and has been deeply impacted by the after effects. 

She is against marriage? Well that's s first! ANd she more aloof and introvert. The 'old' ASR. 

I love how Arnav is trying to change his life around and move on from his past. He is learning what life really is, and is accepting this new lifestyle. 

They are a perfect couple, and one completes another. 

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 12:14am | IP Logged
Totally adored this - loved this Arnav and Khushi who are all about finding themselves and letting their emotions do the talking. The greatness of this story lies in the subtleness of how all those beautiful, meaningful emotions are described. I must say that I felt this story rather than read this story - so few words exchanged but so much meaning to the them. Well doneClap
 
Ps - I will be inactive for the next weeks. Catch up when I get back in May 2013 but do keep sending the pms please.
 
thanks


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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 12:23am | IP Logged
Beautifull... LOved it...Smile

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 12:33am | IP Logged
Fabulous completely loved it

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 12:57am | IP Logged
Hullo!

I still cannot believe that I am making thread two after just three stories!

Thank you for being so generous with your comments, your support is what keeps us going!

Here is the link to thread two, we hope to see you there...


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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 1:48am | IP Logged
amazing story, u write so beautifully, loved itSmile

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 5:11am | IP Logged
Didn't realize you'd written the third part till just now, Juhi. That was a fabulous rendering of the rain sequence in the parking lot. You brought out the thrumming desire between the two, giving it a new shape and a new direction. Loved this latest update.Smile


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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 6:00am | IP Logged
Semanti, sorry I did not have time to comment on A Tale in Red, I have been very busy. 

All I can say is it is such a brilliant peice of writing. The short story is my favourite genre- it is notoriously difficult to write one as it has to capture everything in a short space, it has to be self-contained. And yours has done spectacularly so.

You've taken these two iconic moments in the show and given the characters and the moments a meaning that lies way beyond the show could manage to get to.

This collaboration has been extremely fortunate for us readers.
Thank you Semanti and Juhi!Clap


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