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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 148)

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 6:13pm | IP Logged
Simply superb!

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 8:17pm | IP Logged
call that destiny or fate..
u'll know it when the right one comes along...  Day DreamingHeart


tks for the PM,   Juhi.


loved it.!
its beautiful... as always...




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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 8:33pm | IP Logged
Absolutely awesome, this was such a beautiful one, every time I read something you write my belief that you should write a book becomes stronger...at least think about it! 

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 9:20pm | IP Logged
sweet story. loved the way he saved her :)


and loved the rain. 



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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 9:42pm | IP Logged
This is just wonderful.
 So many scenes, so many dialogue you incorporated in this story with the show.
 Of course the rain hug, definitely in better version.
Their trip reminded me so many sequences of the nainital trip.
So many things are opposite here.
 Like in nainital Khushi ordered plenty of food, here Arnav did it.
 In nainital Arnav ordered only bottle of mineral water, here Khushi did the same. 
But the funny part is, in your story Khushi is more like Arnav and Arnav is more like Khuhsi.
  Khushi is laconic, she is diebetic, not romantic.
 But on the other hand Arnav is a jolly guy and mischievous like Khushi.
I liked artist and poet Arnav here. He seems really romantic and emotional.
You gave the final jolt in the mishri part. In the show Khushi added mishri in Arnav's car, here Arnav did it.In IPK Khushi did it for La and in your story Arnav did it for himself. But i must say what a master plan he made to get Khushi!
Love at first sight then kiss on the first date,not a date, don't know what should I call this, just amazing.
and your writing is brilliant as usual.
loved the pic of napa valley. wish to go there sometime.

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 10:36pm | IP Logged
MESMERIZING...I COULD NOT USE  ANOTHER WORD TO DESCRIBE MY FEELINGS AFTER READING THIS ONE NIGHT STORY ...

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
That was so beautiful.

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