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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 147)

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A cynical, world-weary, non-believer-in-marriage Khushi and a used-to-be-a-compulsive-workaholic-but-now-completely-chilled-out, marriage-mein-believing Arnav. Juhi, this is what we used to call "adla-badli" as kids!Smile

Khushi's attitude to love and marriage is understandable. She's not had the best example to go by, has she? But look at how differently the two sisters have responded to their parents' failed relationship'Payal is depressed but pulls herself out of it to look for, and find, love because she believes her parents were an exception to the rule. Khushi's coping mechanism is to completely "get rid of everything that reminded her of the person she used to be." But that hasn't helped has it? Somewhere inside she's still the young girl trying to come to terms with a horrible childhood. Unable to trust, unwilling to give "any man the power to affect her life". 

Her parents seem too self-centered to bother with. Her mother "chooses" to be with relatives instead of giving her daughters the support they need (no matter how old we are, our parents' separation is still a devastating experience) And neither of them are involved in their daughter's wedding preparations'?Thumbs Down

You did succeed with memories of the Nainital trip. But best of all the parking lot scene. The combination of heat and rain'That was some strong chemistry there, particularly during and after the fashion shoot. And yes, I didn't like how he behaved at the time either!! 

But this Arnav'he's gentle, considerate, and almost the complete antithesis of the early ASR we saw on the show. And besides the desire and the passion, what struck me most was the fact that he made her feel "cherished". Because the feeling of being cherished by the one you love is unmatched by anything else. To know that someone thinks you are precious and will do everything in his power to keep you happy and safe' Heart

And you've brought it in Aman (sigh!) to play Cupid. I always knew that guy was a treasure. 

And you've added Kishore Kumar...my all-time, ultimate favorite Hindi singer (double sigh)

I said it to Semanti and I'm saying it again to you'you ladies are StarStar



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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 11:29am | IP Logged
oh wow so beautiful

their chemistry was awesome

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 11:42am | IP Logged
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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
i loved both the stories, for the 3rd one im a little confused.. ill let u knw after the 2nd part

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
OMG that was just fantastic! im still dazzled by it! super loved it!

congrats load for this magnificent piece of wriiting! its like a piece of art!

loved the way u changed the characters! it was very nice seeing arnav the easy going one who is enjoying life and the work driven khushi who was scared of love and commitment! but it took arnav a mere few hours to change her perspective!

wow the song u chose for arnav to play suited them perfectly and it was kinda of romantic:)

u girls totally deserve a round of applause! it was just mind blowing!

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
AWESOME
 
SO SWEET
 
HE HAD RAN AWAY TO FIND PEACE N HAPPINESS
 
N AT LAST FOUND HER
 
SHE NEEDED SOMEONE WHO CLD MAKE HER FEEL AGAIN N SHE FOUND HIM

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
fabulous os...beautifully written...anji and amans part was cute...keep on writing

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 5:57pm | IP Logged
Lovely update! Absolutely love the role reversal! You described both arnavs and khushis feelings so well. The attraction, hesitation was all there. Looking forward to the next one.

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