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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 146)

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 8:26am | IP Logged
lovely one dear...
thnks for the PM...

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greenMoss Senior Member
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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 8:35am | IP Logged

= Part 1 =

I'm immensely in Love with the crispness of your narration and the magic you weave with the lucid language.

Khushi is exactly the alter ego of Arnav of the show except the infamous and irrational anger.

Arnav is so infinitely sweet and like Khushi in the show.. All dreamy and poetic.

I was beginning to think that he is the quintessential chocolate hero, but he surprised me big time with his cold fury and protectiveness in the cafe, in front of the drunk man.

I loved the characterization of Arnav.


Edited by greenMoss - 20 April 2013 at 9:33am

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 8:36am | IP Logged

= Part 2 =

This part has a feel good factor to it. The retelling of the scenes from the show was done Greatly.

Saving Khushi from the speeding car scene is very, very fantastic.

Arnav's feelings were very well potrayed. I liked his perspective about marriage.

So, it was originally the plan of the sibling.

Putting sugar grains inside the fuel tank was funny.


Edited by greenMoss - 20 April 2013 at 12:35pm
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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 8:41am | IP Logged

Thanks for the PM.

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Theepthidevi Goldie
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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 8:44am | IP Logged
Awesome update:) Amazingly written. Loved the update. Their usual natures are reversed. What an idea...

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momoahmd IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 8:48am | IP Logged
u r brilliant dear...
such awsm n amaxnggg concepts...
u hv made my weekend by writing such a beautiful OS...
lovd readng every bit ov it...
n
thnxxx 4 da pm...

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Lalaland222 Goldie
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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 8:59am | IP Logged
This was SO different, really. I was so shocked. I mean, one it was beautifully written. Second, it was different. You transfered all the qualities of Arnav into Khushi and All qualities of Khushi into Arnav. I mean this kind of an idea wouldn't have passed any one's mind. Literally. 
I'm never short of words, I blabber irrelevantly just like Khushi :P But I am so out of words. Don't know how to tell you man. I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS. 
I can't wait for the next one or what you have in store for us. Please be a director when you grow up, I beg youz? :( Hug
^_^ 



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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 9:37am | IP Logged
wow...just read all three One Shots from both of you and got to say it was awesome...great updates for the most enchanting moments of IPK and loved all the twists with all those lovely moments...waiting for the next one...

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