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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 145)

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 6:58am | IP Logged
res for juhi's  a tale of R&R  Big smile

unres Big smile 

i didnot want to comment on R&R before semanti's that is y 2 consecutive res Embarrassed

dear juhi i'm at a loss for words...what shall i say ... both semanti and u r competing with each other to excel and give us perfect stories...i know there can be no comparison among writers and their imagination but i want to say that as writers both of u have captured the essence of the scenes which u r striving to depict and overwrite their wants...i luv it ...  Clap

eventhough there is a role reversal those characteristics that define arhi remain within their bond...
the icing on the arhi cake was definitely aman...actually i was wondering what the...  east or west SMJ can never change and how true it turned out ...it required the all time invisible loyalist aman to set the ball rolling between arhi...i actually enjoyed that part...it was just too gud ... i wud not have believed  that all is well in lalaland if it had been SMJ in the place of aman doing the act Wink

anyway even for anjali to lead a blissful and positive marital life it requires aman and definitely not SMJ  Tongue...probably that is the reason why ASR has positive approach to life while khushi doesnot  Wink LOL LOL

thanx for the pm ...pls continue soon ...awaiting semanti's  Big smile

edit #2
btw thanx for posting both the chaps together as i wud have been left desperate on their road travel before reaching their destination if chap#2 had not been posted WinkLOLEmbarrassed




Edited by amus5 - 20 April 2013 at 8:06am

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 7:17am | IP Logged
read the last two stories together. god, you two are gifted.
first the tale in red, that was mesmerizing, it was something out of a fairy take, it wasn't like Cinderella but it sure was a dream, a beautiful one at that. The fact that he was the famous champion and she the damsel in distress, was so magical.

then the tale of roads and rain, the intensity of emotions and variations within the confines of that car, was electrifying in the least. It was jusf thaf, electrifying. Gave me goosebumps, really, such silent pleasure. it was sexy, it was powerful, it was so intriguing, everything that went on in their heads. stunning

love
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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 7:30am | IP Logged
it was beatifulll... reverse of their charater from show khushi s like asr n asr is more like khusii...
like how they to starnger met n fall in love witheach othr
n the kiss was magical...
loved it
thanks for pm

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 7:36am | IP Logged
Wonderful story... Sent shivers down my spine...

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 7:36am | IP Logged
What the hell was that?!?!
I.Am.Totally.Totally.Flabbergasted... haaa!!! Thats just to be compendious about the effect of the tale on me! :))

I was completely drawn into it ... 
If the chirpy bubbly Khushi that usually had absorbed us ... the Khushi you came up with was received with the same elan ... Absolutely loved it... 

And what can i say The Arnav of your tale!? The name is enough ... isn't it? The panache he creates in our minds about himself whatever be the flavour of the genre ... is but  incredible... so here too he did not disappoint us!! :))

Yes the role reversal just added to it on the whole... 

All together i loved the concept!! that was a beautiful culmination of the far-famed backdrops from the show that had captivated our hearts much to a heightened extent ... 
I would rather say the grounds that you created for the same scenes have come to become my fave better than the original ones from the show!  

Ouhh!! did it have to end? did it really have to? i am so developing a strong pull towards Dhadkanien .. that i find myself stalking the thread more often these days... :)
Cant wait for the next Tale now! :) 

That was brilliant Juhi ... Semanti..!! :)
 

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 7:37am | IP Logged
Thnx 4 d pm

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 7:49am | IP Logged
Really liked the two shot
Rain, romance,passion. All the ingredients were well blended

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 8:02am | IP Logged
Aaah...lovely...I love the fact that you incorporate the actual scenes...helps us picturise them...muah to both you girls for a such a wonderful job

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