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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 144)

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 5:16am | IP Logged
A Tale of Roads - a gorgeous story. Such a romantic notion...I wonder whether its ever happened in real life and lasted the rest of time. Day Dreaming

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 6:04am | IP Logged
amazing story

in this story i feel that khushi is arnav and arnav is khushi

that's was really beautiful 

loved it

two strangers fall in love

will be waiting 4 the next story 

thnxxx 4 pm

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 6:12am | IP Logged
yahooo just loved it.. 
you simply made my weekend...
It was FAB...
It was really shocking that khushi was diabetic in this story and that was a good change...
and also in this story Arnav was not the rude or arrogant ASR, he was a kind hearted and loveing gentleman...
loved the way how he showed possesiveness when the drunken came to khushi... 
their kiss in public was AWESOME .. LOL hahhaha..
i also actually thought that khushi left but she did not ..
thank god in this story anjali's husband was amaan..
hahahhhaha it was really shocking to read that aman put the grain in fuel tank becoz he saw somthing in arnav's eyes for khushi ... hehehehe completely loyal to arnav..
just loved it..
thankx for pm

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 6:26am | IP Logged
oh juhi, this time u kept the scene and its essence as it is and just incorporated a much more beautiful background (in terms of story) to it proving that you are about to become a master in this art of story telling.

since i got to know tht arnav name means sea, i have always associated a song of madam noor-jahan with arnav and khushi, that songs goes as "mein teray sang kesay chalon sajna, tu samandar (sea) hai mein saahilo ke hawa (sea shore breeze)" and when i read your work yesterday i again remembered tht song but this time i so wanted khushi's name to mean sea. 

a SUV, two individuals, both young, good looking and emotionally connected to each other one specifically in red with CHERRY BLOSSOM as her smell, the scenic beauty of NAPA VALLEY what more could you want to be perfect? may be a pink coloured champagne to celebrate their togetherness which they both are having while sitting at the bonnet of his suv, which is parked in front of the scenic beauty of napa valley.
though i dnt knw anything abt alcoholic drinks but tht pink clrd champagne have always attracted me like those pink colour cherry blossoms. and that was what i imagined while reading it, not my self at all irrespective of tht cherry blossom connection :).

thanks alot for it i literally laughed out aloud when i read that.

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 6:32am | IP Logged
The tale was cute...two totally different strangers spending time together and falling deeply in love was a treat to read...
waiting  to read moreSmile

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 6:39am | IP Logged
Beauuutifulll...i really loved reading it...both updates are awesome...khushi's nature s more lyk asr in ipkknd and arnav s lyk khushi...super cool!!! arnav having sweet tooth and khushi diabetes??? Hay re nandkishore!!!
Napa valley s Just so awesome...!!!
It has become ma fav spot...i wanna go there...thnx fr sharing...keep writing...

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 6:50am | IP Logged
Semanti, once again you've had me enthralled.Clap
Actually, Expel, Hiteat and some of the others have expressed far more beautifully what I'd like to say about this story. Wish I could just copy-paste what they wrote. But I guess I'll have to bungle along on my own..Wink
I agree, the Diwali non-kiss was not my favorite scene either. I much preferred the unravelling-the-Diwali-lights-by-the-pool one. The unspoken desire and passion in that was beautiful to watch.
But I love how you've taken what is as important a festival in the West as Diwali is in India and woven the Arnav-Khushi magic into it so seamlessly. 
A spirited Khushi, yet one who is appreciative of what she does have rather than hankering for what she cannot get or cannot be. A young, yet mature, Arnav who's life has more or less been planned out for him and one who "couldn't remember looking or feeling that happy ever." 
Both characters have been etched out well despite the short story. You've taken so much from that scene and given it a completely different twist, yet you've retained many of the nuances that form the essence of what is actually an iconic scene in the show. And yes, thank you for THE KISS. I think we all probably said a collective "Finally..."
Perfect...you and Expel are StarStar

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 6:57am | IP Logged
res for semati's tale in red Big smile

unres Big smile

i know i'm ressing quite late for semanti's but i wanted to write about it  before i write about R&R sorry for the late comment Embarrassed
the truth be had that i missed reading semanti's as i was held up in other things Ouch Embarrassed
anyway coming to the story
 
   i must say semanti this is the first of ur works that i'm reading and omg i have lost out a lot Cry
the tale was just beautiful and the narrator actually transported me to the rink...i must say the whole world of arhi revolved,evolved and bloomed within that rink...i even saw that autumn scene from within the rink...and the whole tale just skated and glided smoothly within the rink itself ...there was just no chance of khushi falling down as whole tale skated all along as though it was floating on thin air Clap Star
i just enjoyed it thoroughly and was left behind with a gud feeling... Smile
i know my comments r just inadequate but kya kare itna hi mere bas ki baat hai Embarrassed
dear semanti pls continue writing ...luv ur narration 

thanx for the pm Big smile


Edited by amus5 - 20 April 2013 at 7:12am

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