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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 138)

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 7:57pm | IP Logged
Loved this story!!

The complete reversal of roles. Their characters.
How he has a sweet tooth and she is diabetic. 
She is a workaholic and he is enjoying life.

How they both love their sisters'. 

Loved Aman-Anjali.

I loved the rain hug. The road trip to Nainital was one of the funniest parts of the show..

Can't wait for Semanti's story...

Thanks for the PM..

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 8:19pm | IP Logged
very well written worth the wait...brilliant!!

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 8:25pm | IP Logged
And I'm super late Disapprove
Kya start tha!Clap
The effect was so good that when Khushi shivered...I too shivered with herLOL
Divorce...you beautifully handled that issue as well; the opposite reactions of the two siblings to it.

Hot chocolate...sirf chocolate suna tha...par hot chocolate? Who doesn't love it?Embarrassed

And then spring flowers...the lie just so that he could be with her..Day Dreaming And I'll have to visit Napa valley soonSmile

Ek ladki bheegi bhaagi si..kya gaana choose kiya!Big smile

Khushi diabetic?Shocked...now that was a curveball!

I'm short on time...will read and comment on part two laterSmile

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 8:27pm | IP Logged
Really Loved It...
You wrote It very Beautifully...

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 8:32pm | IP Logged
Just read 'a terrace tale' part 1!
Phew,shyam was just Kushi's brother!That was quite a surprise!
Is Arnav an undercover cop?
You kick ass in the surprise element of the stories you write !

I kinda understood the opening hindi dialogue in the chapter as it was a major dialogue in IPK, but what does "dhadkanein" in the banner mean?

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 9:01pm | IP Logged
So so so sweet

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 9:05pm | IP Logged
Napa Valley!!!  Loooved your choice of location!   What a setup for the opening scene trying to fool your readers with a gota wearing Kushi who has nothing in common with the one in the show.  And Arnav!  Role reversal and it worked so well because of the way you made it work!  I love how he became Kushi Kumari Gupta and talked to himself.  Loved the fact that this story was a lot from his point of view as well.  Loved The possessiveness he showed when the drunk dared to approach her at the cafe.  And she did not mind, did she that he showed the other guy that she was with him.  Loved how she calmed him down too.  This drive was way better than any first date.  I was just at Lax last month so I was completely picturing him sitting in his car, thinking about what just happened and how he needed to get in touch with her again.  The vision in red in his rear view mirror was so the parking lot scene from the show and one of my best memories of them - maybe even the best rain scene that I have seen on tv.  Her innocent eyes and his naked emotions - not sure what he felt but it was passionate enough to make me forget he was the one to send her out in the rain in the first place.  She went with her feelings instead of her dimaag and gave them a chance.  Sweet!  You just keep getting better and better at making your readers fall in love with Arhi all over again!

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 9:08pm | IP Logged
Awesome!! Simply loved the concept of role reversals between the two and how Arnav tries to conceal the fact that he's a millionaire many times over! And khushi a diabetic! Wow! Thank you so much for the PM and update soon..

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