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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 137)

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 4:45pm | IP Logged
First off all I just want to say i get to write my 1000 post on your mind blowing and phenomenol story, Yahooo to me. 

Coming to the updates both parts were brilliant and amazing. Loved the story and you had written it perfectly and exceptionally well from start to finish. Awww love the fact that you gave Arnav and khushi's characters role reversal and just loved the concept of the story. Arnav was attracted to khushi straight away and khushi slowly realised throughout the car journey. I loved the possessive and protective side of Arnav in the cafe where the guy tried to touch khushi, he was so angry but khushi managed to calm him down. Awww Arnav was feeling so dejected and upset when khushi had left him, but I was so happy she came back for him. Loved the way you wrote the car park scene, you bought your own fabulous and beautiful twist to it, I loved the car park hug scene in the serial it was first ever episode i watched. Wow there kiss was so passionate, intense and sensual, you had written it beautifully and perfectly. Also loved the fact that it was Aman's idea to add the grains in khushi's car and played Cupid between Arnav and khushi, I'm sure Arnav would love him for this idea. Thanks for the PM xx 


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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 4:46pm | IP Logged
its fantabulous i luvd it ...

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 4:59pm | IP Logged
That was wonderful. I loved that you reversed their lives essentially. 

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 5:06pm | IP Logged
Amazing story.

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 6:08pm | IP Logged
omg, i loved that, absolutely brilliant.

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 6:26pm | IP Logged
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They got married in the Shantivan vinery! Tumhe aise khayal aate kaise hai...?! Ajeeb ho tum! Par I farq you dammit! 

S its your turn..now. A tale of unlikely allies! Mr. & Mrs. Smith flashbacks. AHHH. I am not sure if its evident, cant wait for monday. well my case tuesday. 

Aajke 2000 words khatam. See you ladies on the next thread ;) 

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 6:55pm | IP Logged
Brilliant story. Loved the twists you put in. I thought the first chapter was very clear...you set up the fact that all was not what it seemed and in the second chapter you revealed what it actually was...and it was genius!!

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 6:59pm | IP Logged
amazing story as usual! I loved it from beginning to end!! I love how there was a role reversal here with Khushi being a workaholic and a diabetic. That was really interesting. I loved their whole Nanital trip in the show, but I love your version even better! The story flowed so beautifully! It almost seemed like I could see it unfold in front of me. You and Semanti are so talented and I'm so glad you guys decided to do this. Can't wait to read the next story!

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