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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 134)

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 2:03pm | IP Logged
Semanti - A Tale In Red

This was really good and loved it was lengthyLOL
Khushi being extremely into studies that she had no social life, her being genuinely thankful for all she had and never complained
Her developing a crush on The Arnav Singh Raizada that was rich and hot and had every girl fawn over him..a crush that she never even thought could be reciprocated
and then you have Arnav who gets intoxicated by her laughter, and then notices her around and actually wanted to talk to her but felt maybe a little self-conscious that she might not want to talk to him

the kiss was cute, originally unexpected by Khushi and i love how she stumped him when she kissed the pad of his thumb that was stroking her lip
and showing her not-so-shyness biting him on the lip to make them even

a very iconic scene - the diwali and i agree frustration over the almost and being upset about all that happened after but it is my favourite as that was like a turning point for them (feelings wise)

well written, great storyClap

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
Awww! That's so sweet! I loved that you have incorporated so many things from the show into your story. And a big thanks for posting both the parts together!!

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
Lovely juhi..
It was very subtle and the role reversal was awesome.. It was unimaginable to imagine not eatin sweets..
Loved to relive all the ipk moments..

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 2:16pm | IP Logged
It was a fantastic update.



Thanks for PM

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
just amazing...want more...Tongue

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 2:23pm | IP Logged
oh i totally loved it... a diabetic and a workaholic Khushi and a warm and firm believer in marriage Arnav... wohooo awesomeee
really enjoyed reading it... loved the rain hugging scene :D

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 2:29pm | IP Logged
Nice one.khushi with flaws and heart ache of Arnav.Arnav with positivity and foodie like Khushi . It's fresh one.fun to read. Thanks for the PM.

Edited by Bavari - 19 April 2013 at 2:30pm

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 2:36pm | IP Logged
Nice story

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