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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 133)

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
I liked it...

the character switch was a good trial...though it did take me a min to digest khushi being diabetic with her fetish for jalebis' on mind...and arnav eating huge...

liked the ending...reunion bit of her coming back and the rain scene to have ended with a kiss. As you have said the actual rain scene had the potential to have a passionate kiss in it...but I don't think they would have ever allow that in India...chemistry is evident.

thank you.

sri.

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
Beautiful part..<3

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
That was soo good!! Thier chemistry was intense! Really like how you wrote each emotion they were feeling!!

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
Wonderful tale of two awesome characters of all time.

Loved the role reversal, I always wondered about a ASRish Khushi and a Khush Arnav. It was real good and you portrayed as I imagined this scenario.

Loved the road journey, rain, Khushi in red shalwar, one SUV, loads of chemistry and off course Arnav. Wow you did all that in one single update, as ASR would say UNBELIVABLE.

Will wait eagerly for the next story.

Thanks for the update.

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
Big smile

Awesome ... 

A beautifully written story ... was an absolute pleasure to read ... 
brought back lots of memories of the serial ... 
and just loved the chemistry between the leads ... 
would really love to write a long comment but will not be doing justice to the story ... 

Thanks ... Hug


Edited by Kishmish - 20 April 2013 at 12:49am

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
as usual you have done full justice to the story. Love your style of writing.and thanks for the PM
 

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 1:58pm | IP Logged
OMG This was an awesome update.
The description of their emotions were amazing.
I have some questions:
1) How did they knew each other? OK I get it that Khushi read his name from drivers license but what about Arnav? Why did Khushi stopped talking after looking at Anjali picture?
2) Who put the grain again? Was it Aman or Anjali?
3) What happened to Arnav in ast?
4) What did Anjali meant by the "millionaire"?

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 2:00pm | IP Logged
blooming heck
i swear it keeps getting better and better
all those things that made arhi with them even stronger and more in tune with one another
ohhh man the reversal of few key characteristics in their personality which made things only better
and to think they met just once and it led to this
isnt love weird sometimes
but i guess they both needed the other
so who would have thought that nanital trip that never was what it was supposed to be could have been like this
wait does it make sense that
so aman put sugar grains in her car as he knew she is the one for him
even he realised it but of course he didnt know why
and she was so different than usual
but the difference is what made this story even more fun
ahhh that was some encounter they had
and am glad this was the outcome
i swear your tales are uch more fun interesting intriguing and mysterious than the show itself
sorry for offending fans but it seems so true that
cheers for pm
cant wait for next one now

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