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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 126)

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 9:03am | IP Logged
That was amazing I literally wolfed down my dinner to read this Smile
It was beautiful.
Cant wait for the next one.
God bless Jenna

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 9:03am | IP Logged
Reversal of roles Smile. loved it.

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 9:12am | IP Logged
superb...
loved the you write.. as you didn't mentioned their coz they were stranger to each other and didn't know each others name.. you kept that till the end... that was awesome work.. seriously
 
this also remind me of nainital trip and rain hug and yeah, that dhabha scene, where khushi orders every item from and arnav just water, well here role was reverse totally
loved this reverse role concept...
 
so arnav was millionaire... that revealed at the end and that whole trip was planned by aman...  god that again remind of Ipkknd when khushi put sugar balls on arnav's car...
 
very very beautifully written tale... loved it to bitsClap
 
waiting for next one

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 9:13am | IP Logged
wonderfull as always...

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 9:13am | IP Logged
Superb :)

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 9:14am | IP Logged
Hey a really really nice two-shot.
 
So Anjali is always the saviour sister and matchmaker here!!Heart

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 9:16am | IP Logged
the banner for this series is damn appropriate for this story, don't you think!
 
Simply Lovely! just went gaga over the role reversal: khushi, the driven workaholic disillusioned with marriage and arnav, the relaxed 'artist' who stops to smell the roses! Am tickled silly by the fact that this arnav isn't fastidious about cleanliness or having everything just so! Pleased that he has remained the multi-millionaire, though Smile! the convo about Kishore Kumar was another eye-opener! each and every scene has been so beautifully delineated and flowed and blended so seamlessly that I can't pick or choose favourites... that anjali's husband was aman came as a pleasant surprise, though loved him 'commandeering' khushi's 'sugar in the fuel tank' ploy to stall her car... the rain rescue was outstanding, as was the incorporation of all those iconic lines: "Tum theek ho?" "Agar tumhe kuch ho jaata toh? What if I had lost you, dammit?!" "You never are! Do you ever know what's happening around you?" "Mujhe faraq padhta hai, dammit!" only "Coz I love you dammit!" is missing from this scintillating mix!
a naughty arnav at his flirtatious best, saying that khushi won't be 'kumari' gupta for much longer is just awww Day Dreaming, and I am sure khushi's expression mirrors ours!
 
agree with your point about the rain hug being an unwitting result of his punishment... if one considers it, most of the iconic or powerful scenes / dialogues cannot be digested because of the inevitable cruelty arnav showed khushi before, during or after the same... I am all for women's lib, so can't understand why I was willing to overlook and forget his caustic tongue and physical intimidation of khushi the moment he did something to support her against his family / the public or to show his love for her Confused!
 
loved your story and am eagerly awaiting the next instalment!

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 9:19am | IP Logged
It was like reading a piece of poetry. 
It made me nostalgic. Reminded me of the rainy season in India where one enjoys the rain, getting wet in the rain. Where you it and watch the raindrops falling, listening to old hindi film songs.
The choice of song was so appropriate. It suited the situation so well.
Just loved the whole scenario.
Also loved the way you have sprinkled dialogues and situations from the serial in your story. 
They are so much part of the story, they don't seem picked up from the serial.
ZNMD is one of my favourite road journey films. I can safely say that this story is even better.

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