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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 123)

anumadduri Senior Member
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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 7:31am | IP Logged
Loved the way you did a total  role reversal of characters here!!!!! Thank god for people like Aman who interfere once in a while in other people's business though in a good way :) He is the perfect brother in law :)  You put in so many of my favorite scenes together in this story . The Nainital trip , the saving her in the rain sequence , the sugar granules in the petrol tank , albeit Aman did this to Khushi though Wink a very beautiful story Juhi ... Loved it :) 

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 7:32am | IP Logged
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The scenes which inspired you write this were ones that had me wishing that they could have been different. Stranded alone on the road to Nainital was a situation which could have been handled better than ehat the CV's did.Saving Khushi in the parking lot scene was epic but for the fact that he put her in that daner in the first place.
So in this tale I got my alternate endings.
Big smile
I loved the role reversal concept!
Once again a tale to remember Smile The best part was the way you described Arnav's anger.
Amidst all the What theand enough I always thought that the scenes when Arnav was angry was good especially the low, menacing voice and the gritting of teeth.So the anger at the drunk man was a part I loved.The Airport scene reminded me of the scene in the show .Arnav gobbling the food reminded me of the time he relished the food cooked by Khushi during the dabba service track.The "what if i lost you " part was again epic! Clap
Great job Juhi!   
And you have posted both the parts and completed the tale in a go! Embarrassed
yane ki no cliffhangers! someone pinch me! LOL

Edited by preethi28 - 19 April 2013 at 9:40am

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 7:35am | IP Logged
Why should Arnav have to be a rich guy... To make him acceptable ..
I would have liked it more if Arnav had been a painter... Who dropped out of the rat race.. Or is a genuine painter... A reversal of personalities..

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 7:38am | IP Logged
Juhi,
First of all I just want to give you a huge tight hugHug

This was beautiful
The role reversal was brilliant and his reaction when he found out about her being a diabetic.

I so look forward to your updates

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 7:41am | IP Logged
Nice

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 7:42am | IP Logged
That was just perfect! Simply and absolutely! Smile

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 7:54am | IP Logged
agar tumhe kush ho jata toh...our ipkknd has so many beautiful dialogues that you can revolve entire stories around them but still never get bored...you wrote a master piece again...you never mentioned a name in most of the story but still we knew that you are talking arshi that is power of their love..our love...yet different approach ..beautiful 

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 7:55am | IP Logged
wonderful story yet again

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