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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 122)

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 6:30am | IP Logged
 yayay...i am on first page...!!!Dancing
that was a shockingly awesome update...!!!
after reading a lot of fan fictions on ARHI...i still can say that this one is the best two shot i have ever read...!!!
in just one update...there is arnav...there is khushi...there is attraction...desire...fear...pain...emotions...the pull...rain...road...haunted pasts...anger...n LOVE...all that which completes arnav-khushi...!!
there is always and unsaid love between both of them...which they didint realize but its always there...holding them together...!!!


the story starts with a wedding here too...that too of khushi's sister...khushi is arranging everything for her jiji's happiness...but the things are different...emotions are different...!!! the very idea of MARRIAGE is not in khushi's preferences...reason being parents' divorce...it happens...happens a lot actually...parents' actions are observed by their children...a child learns and earns everything from their parents...they hold a great impact on their children...breakdown of marriages usually had negative impacts...some children get out of this trauma...and some carries this with their lives...fear of experiencing the same situation forced them in viewing things in a different way...just to protect themselves from bearing more pain...same us the case here with KHUSHI...Unlike payal..who saw their parents divoece in a different way...she believes that there is no need in handing over her life to sumone...but WHEN THESE THINGS ARE IN OUR HANDS...!!!



"Tum theek ho?"

whenever i read or heard this line...it has the capabiltily of giving me goosebumps...arnav's facr with that expressions automatically flashed in fronts of my eyes...the man is seriously very talanted...*sigh*

so he is noticing her during the wedding..and her car breakdwon became the golden chance for...hell...!!! he agreed to carry her to L.A. when is heading towards SAN FRANCISCO...!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

the whole car ride is superbingly beautiful...it like they had switch to ech other's personalities...khushi flipping her i pad...arnav's continous attempts of talking to her...khushi's stubborness...arnav's bubbliness...stealing glances...few moments of intimacy...!!

and then the song...that make me giggle...!!!LOLLOL 

Ek ladki bheegi bhaagi si...
Soyi raaton mein jaagi si...
Mili ek ajnabi se, koi aage na peeche.,
Tum hi kaho yeh koi baat hai...


the way arnav is describing the significance of rain to khushi is treat to read...its so unlike arnav ...and khushi's sarcastic comment is so unlike khushi...!!

khushi too was attracted towards him from the very first moment...!!! ohh that diabetic part was sachmuch so exiciting...arnav being a foodie,,,,and khushi being diabetic...!!!...i wonder how it came to your mind...!!!!
but then it hits me...u r a wonderrfuuull writer for nothiingg...!!!Wink

then he left her at the airport,,,nd the restlessness started...!!!


the second part completely beautiful,,,i enjoyed it a lot...so aesomely written...arnav's fight with his racing heart...and then the realization hit him,,,,they didnt even exchange names...so silly of them...AND AND AND the RAIN HUG...i too didnt like it in the show...he is punishing her...but hre he is saving her...caring her...LOVING HER..!!!


"Cherry blossom."
lol...seriously man...he is figuring out her perfume which smells of spring flowers...!!!

the follwing lines are beautiful of all...!!!

"Do you always expend so much energy on figuring out which perfume a stranger wears?"

"Not every stranger. Just you."


then the HEART MELTING RAVISHINGLY AWESOME KISS...!!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassedBlushing


"Do you always kiss strange men with such uninhibited passion?"

"Not all strange men."


then the reasons of her leaving and his reasons of not telling...the trust issues...!!!

"No...it's Khushi...Kumari Gupta."


"Not for long."



and then that bomb dropping of yours,,,,AMAN-ANJALI...!!!
i thought they met by destiny but cupids have to play their role right...!!!Shocked


"Aman, do you think he's already told her that he's a millionaire many times over?"

so he is a MILLIONAIRE HERE TOO...!!!

SUPAWESSUMMM...!!!!


Edited by avantisharma - 20 April 2013 at 3:07am

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 6:52am | IP Logged
okay asr...get out of khushi's body nd khushi get out of asr's body...kidding...LOL
awesome story...Smile
the arnav in this story has 2 be the dreamiest guy ever!!Day Dreaming...loved him sooo much...Blushing
when he protected her.....he was angry but at the same time cool...
khushi's heart beat increased after seeing him...some1 who doesn't believe in love or marriage fell in love at the first sight...Smile
his waiting...her return...he saving her... their kiss...their need 2 be with each other without even knowing anything abt each other...all so romantic!!...
nd now i just realized what kind of romantic mood i m in after reading this...LOL
but the funniest part is i would never guessed that AMAN put GRAINS of SUGER in khushi's car...LOL...it reminded me of the time when khushi did something similar 2 arnav's car in IPK...


Edited by no_username - 19 April 2013 at 9:19am

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 6:55am | IP Logged
Res

Unres!!!

Please tell me I am dreaming!!!!
Am I the 4th one to comment!!!!!
YaaaYYY!!!!!LOLParty

Okay.. now lets get serious...
That was Fantastic Juhi Di!!
I loved the way you switched the character shade of Arnav and Khushi!!
I loved that part.
And Haye!!!! Arnav stealing glances at Khushi...Day Dreaming
and aha... Arnav and Kishore Kumar???
That sounds so... Romantic (Koi Shaq??Tongue )
Mujhe accha laga... and the rain scene...
Its already a darn Fav of everyone on IPK forum...
You carried the scenes so well...
The first was ur take on Nainital right? and the second on the Rain scene?
Two totally different scenes-one that dealt with Comedy and love and the other one with Hatred and desire...
Damn!!!! U stole the limelight man!!!
I loved the incorporation of the two scenes...
U are one awesome writer Juhi Di...
Laaaooo UUU!!!!!

Yashi


Edited by ForeverArhi - 19 April 2013 at 9:29am

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 7:05am | IP Logged
First thought: There is something..mature, grown up, melancholic about this tale...

I have to go read completely and come back

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 7:09am | IP Logged
Res...Off to read will come back and comment.
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Speechless that is what i am after reading this awesome role reversal of sorts.
I just hope that you realise and know what an awesome writer you are. 
Tussi Great ho Juhiji !!!!!!! BUS Clap
I can't weave magic with words the way you do hence i don't think i do a good job of appreciating what you have written.  But every time every single time i read one of your stories i have a bright smile on my face. Smile
It was good to read about this diabetic, educated, smart, emotionally broken khushi and a foodie, talkative, family oriented Arnav for a change.  
To think that the inspiration for their journey was actually the nanital road trip which i thought was one of the most hilarious tracks of IPK and you went and changed it into such a aww filled romantic road trip of falling in love. Only you could have done it. Star
What do i say about the hug in the 2nd part this was so much better than the original which had so much of hatred in it. This sapno ki Duniya wala/ raindrops wala  Arnav is a keeper for sure.  

And in the midst of all that you managed to put Aman as well in this great story. 

The fact that you gave us both the parts together just goes to show what an incredibly sweet person you are for giving us a weekend with no cliffhangers...Let me give a big hug just for that Hug


But before i go please throw some light into Arnav's last sentence 'Not for long' are we talking about a surname change in the future or something else all together Wink Blushing



Liza


Edited by kondhili - 19 April 2013 at 11:45am

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 7:19am | IP Logged
An epic story
I just loved it
You guys are so good at this

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 7:20am | IP Logged
Juhi & semanti - finally read u guys' stories.. I have so much to say n yet I m speechless.. How can you guys write so beautifully.. It's unfair, almost that i wouldn't be able to pick a favorite, even if my life depended on it. Yet if someone asked me to I would tell them - mere do anmol ratan, ek hai Ram, ek Lakhan.. Not that u wud ever ask such a thing but my heart wants to bea little biased n have only one person to hero worship... Lekin Janam samjha karo is all I tell my poor heart!! Juhi, your first story was all about putting your famous twist after twist on everything that happened in the show to take ur story infinity n beyond.. N semanti your story was most exquisite and never done before Cinderella version of first love and almost hard to believe coz of its pure innocence... You guys make me go on verbal diarrhea - unfair!!!

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