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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 116)

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
Semanti - A Tale in Red

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Hi Semanti! I don't quite know... Well I don't quite know Juhi either, but I know her work. :)

But after reading this Tale I was left awestruck! It was beyond fabulous!

From the begining to the end. Each little moment was enjoyable! :)

I loved the narration of both Khushi's and Arnav's personal lives! And I've wasn't plain and boring, even with the narration you kept us interested!

Khushi's festering little crush was anything if not sweet! :) I like how you practically created the emotion of one's first love. :)

Also the description Arnav's fascination when he had that flashback was nothing less. :)

The ice rink scene was of course my favorite!

The initial embarrassment and amusement along with the wonder and care! :)

Oh the Payal turned Ice-skate scene was just too cute! Then the in-incomplete kiss was mind blowing!

Arnav's apologizing actually made me giggle as I would have had the same reaction Khushi did! ;)

I was sad at the end, wishing that maybe like Juhi you would have decided to give us a two part Tale, but alas. Anyways the Tale fabulous either way! :)

Now for quotes. You probably don't know, but I have a fascination with reading and favorite dialouges, quotes, etc are easily memorized by me and so after each comment I give me quotes!

"The best love is the kind that awakens the soul and makes us reach for more, that plants a fire in our hearts and brings peace to our minds. And that's what you've given me. That's what I'd hoped to give you forever" - Nicholas Sparks.

"You know what charm is: a way of getting the answer yes without having asked any clear question." - The Fall.(For Arnav!)

"Before we belonged to anyone else, we were each other's." - The Way We Were.


Edited by Titaliya_AP - 20 April 2013 at 11:33pm

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
OMFG...this is brilliant girl...awesome
You write so well...Loved it to the core...
Thanks for the PM
Waiting for the next series now...

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 1:57pm | IP Logged
Awesome story Semanti! Loved it to the core! Indeed you and Juhi seem to have something in common. Its very hard to put my finger on what that it is exactly - may be your thought process or may be your writing or may be something else... But whatever it is I am loving this!
 
Thanks for the pm Juhi! Waiting eagerly for the next one...

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 2:28pm | IP Logged
That's brilliant... 

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
beautifully described...

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 4:01pm | IP Logged
Tera pages..
Aur Tera ghante? 

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 4:04pm | IP Logged
oh my god..oh my god..this is just plain beautiful..i dont know why but i want to cry..
just beautiful Heart

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 4:18pm | IP Logged
ohk...!!!
*runs to drink a glass of water out of amazement*
this is just a perfect story u know...just two shots n complete..like completely complete :P
with the perfect way to emote n express...i have to say i fell for UR couple...I fell for UR story just like i fell for ipkknd (if that explains) ;) 
just all the best..u r gonna go a long way in writing 

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