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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 115)

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 9:53am | IP Logged
Finally arrived here..even though i had bookmarked it earlier. Phew!!!
 
@Expel -The 1st chapter was just intriguing enough...it kept my interest piqued...and it was a tale well told. A different kind of face off on the terrace and a completely different reaction from Arnav... that of guilt rather than anger. And I loved Anjali most in your story. How I wish we had seen a stronger and more believable Anjali in the show.
 
@Semanti - what can I say about the Tale in Red...It was sweet, adorable and all things warm despite being set on the Ice hockey rink. Loved the details in this Tale ... loved Khushi even more. And the fact that this Kiss wasnt Missed. such a relief Wink
 
Looking forward to the next story from both of you.

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 10:05am | IP Logged
nice one...
thnks for the PM...

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 10:38am | IP Logged

Awesomeee Semanti!!!

This is the first time I'm reading your work and I'm absolutely bowled over! You write so beautifully!!! Clap You have portrayed every single emotion so well! 

The story is just so real! Like Juhi had commented - "The entire story was just so real and I'm sure a lot of us could relate to it on so many levels, after all, who has not faced the perils of an unrequited crush before?" So true!

And the irony here - "she had a fair sense of colour coordination, didn't she?" Oh yes, she does! Wink

Just loved your tribute to the Diwali almost kiss. Brought back good memories Day Dreaming

The Ice-skating rink = Poolside
Christmas lights = Fairy lights
Khushi in red..

It had everything! At one moment I was giggling over Khushi's antics and thoughts and the next minute I was hyperventilating Blushing

Loved their kiss Blushing 

In simple words..It was just perfect! Smile

Aaahhh..Now Juhi's! Post karo..jaldi.. please? Embarrassed

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 11:25am | IP Logged
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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
I am sorry to have taken so long to comment on the update..but..

This was freaking amazing.

It was..like...warm honey, hot chocolate, winter nights, cozy blanket, fireplace and someone to cuddle with thing...all rolled into one! (I don't know if I made any sense)

It was..JUST the kind of characters I adore (the same in the serial...simple pretty girl, popular handsome serious brooding guy...which drew me in, in the first place) 

And the way you wrote about Khushi in this story was so..SO like..you know, you can actually associate her with any normal girl.

It was all so.. nice.


Sigh.

Loved it :)

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
Mere SKD me jo aaye 
Usse kaho kabhi is thread per bhi aaye? 


Happy Roads & Raindrops update day..! 

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
that was so beautiful and I can't say more...loved it...

intense kissing...some lovely scene of IPK...diwali night...

thx.

sri.

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
Juhi - A Terrace Tale

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Ohhh, I just loved it!

Even though the reasons were different as well as the circumstances, but ArHi's marriage was not at all real to begin with, but I love how Khushi didn't give up!

In the show I was kinda expecting that from Khushi rather than all the troubling she did. :/

Anyways you and you twist and secrets and turns and what not! They are just amazing! Especially when you've taken a scene or event from the show and twisted it to you likings! :)

Uff! Arnav's a man in a uniform, huh?

And as always the other characters haven't been ignored! I loved this Anjali. :)

The way out double AA (Anjali and Aman) came together and brought Arnav and Khushi together was amazing. I think I caught onto that before hand!

Also the way you write is just amazing as always! :)

Now for the quotes :)

"Things come apart so easily when they have been held together with lies." - bas***d Out of Carolina.

"I mean, if the relationship can't survive the long term, why on earth would it be worth my time and energy for the short term?" - The Last Song.(And Khushi knew this)


Edited by Titaliya_AP - 20 April 2013 at 11:15pm

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