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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 109)

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 3:29pm | IP Logged
Great update! So the kiss does take place here! Very well written!

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 3:45pm | IP Logged
beautiful
loved it

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 3:52pm | IP Logged
Aww This is sooo cute ! Lovely !

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 4:22pm | IP Logged
Update day today?? It's Thursday where I am, surely that has to count!

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 4:47pm | IP Logged
absolutely brilliant, very well written, very gripping and so romantic and that kiss, wow, no words to discribe it. you have brightend my day with this.

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 4:52pm | IP Logged
Did not expect this RED? Loved it for 2 reasons the story was fab and secondly it was about my city.

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 5:00pm | IP Logged
First off I freaking loved it. It was so good! It was adorable cute and increased my knowledge of ice hockey lol:) tho this does make me want to learn how to ice skate now ;)

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 5:52pm | IP Logged
This is the first time I'm reading your work.
 I must say you are amazing.
First of all I loved to see Khushi as a Harvard student.I always wanted to see Khushi as an educated and sophisticated woman in the show. Specially when she got married to arnav I thought if they would show her completing her education and assisting Arnav at his work.
 Arnav's character is brilliantly written in the story. He is bright, rich and a great sportsman. I love the guys play ice-hockey. though it's not common in my place. i'm more use to cheer my college base ball team . but i have a weakness for the ice hockey players. Though I heard they are kind of rough and do lot of ragging.
Anyway let's come to your story,As the story progressed I couldn't imagine that Arnav also got a liking for Khushi. cause she is just a simple girl. But khushi definitely had a strong crush on him.And of course their confrontation on the ice ground was amazing. the kiss was just so perfect.I also loved bold Khushi here.
 The diwali almost kiss is one of the sensuous scene of Arnav and Khushi. Yup, I was also disappointed with the unfinished kiss. Of course it's an Indian show. So they can't go overboard. But the aftermath certainly is heart breaking.

Looking forward for your next one.

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