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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 108)

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 1:55pm | IP Logged

loved it

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
This is the first time I'm reading ur work and its absolutely amazinggg!!! The almost kiss is complete now :) lookin forward to reading more of ur work!

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:48pm | IP Logged
Semanti...What an amazing Tale in Red...Loved it...
 
You have penned Arnav and Khushi so beautifully...Their thoughts...emotions...backgrounds everything...
 
Loved this khushi...Independent...ambitious yet very girly with crush on a handsome boy...
 
Arnav...Serious, focused and into Ice Hockey...wow...
 
Loved their journey of falling in love...A beautifully woven tale with a completely different twist of Diwali miss kiss ...
 
Eagerly waiting for the next story by juhi...


Edited by musicfan5 - 17 April 2013 at 2:49pm

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
this was way better than that stupid almost kiss and the after math of the said kiss
man it broke not only khushi heart but ours the way first they didnt get to finish their kiss but also what arnie did to khushi after that
seriously if thats the one thing he really shouldnt be forgiven for ever
that was the start of what followed later on
but enough of that sad tale
this was what would have made me forget that scene
awww she had crush on him and he too noticed her
to think none of this would have happened had she not got a job on the rink which was partly due to him
but so glad she did or we wouldnt have got this
wasnt it adorable how she was coming out with such random things to say as she couldnt think well due to his proximity and his cologne she said
ahhh but he was getting affected too just he didnt show it
in fact he was more affected than he cared to show
well after all he was the one who initiated the kiss
well how long could he hold it off right
and that was one hell of their first kiss
loved it how when he bit her lip he said sorry but she did the same to him
now thats what am talking about this is khushi after all right
that was one hell of a story though
cheers for pm
see ya both again next week

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 3:07pm | IP Logged
that was amazing
loved how you showed khushi and arnav feelings separately
and your version of the diwali scene is brilliant and captivating to read=]

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 3:20pm | IP Logged
Can I tell you a story :)
I can not forget this particular story, for one reason :)
Almost similar happened with me :)
I liked this guy, apparently played ice hockey :) n when i went skating for the bloody first time ever :) he was there with other two friends of mine..
n I did not know then, that I liked him like, like-like; u know what I mean :) n we had planned this ice skating :)
And the first time I ever stepped on ice :) I was soo happy, one only has to be there to see it! And all my friends were amazed seeing me like that..smiling all the time on the ice rink :)
I love the story cause same scenario was there!
And this guy whom I like was there for the first time experience of my skating..when I started reading the story, I was like..heck :)
I can not tell you, but I still remember it vividly, and will cherish it throughout my life :) :)
Thanks for reminding me that beautiful, probably most beautiful moment of my life :)
P.S.: I loved the way you have ended the story, HOPE :)
P.S.:  In all blabbering, i forgot to mention something else :) He did teach me skating and was with me throughout.. i did not FALL even once :) but I was about to fall so i laid down on the ice :) n he was there to help me :)
I can go on n on n on :) I just love the feeling you know :) Since then, I go ice skating every week :) just to revive the moment :)
Oh, HOPE :)



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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 3:27pm | IP Logged
Omg how cute epic Uodate the way he caught her from dropping, and then teaching her to skate, him noticing her and her reaction to him confessing that hahahahha amazing )0:) and when they kissed and he's like I thought you was shy shes like hope I cleared that up by kissing him then she's like why tomorrow why not tonight like amazing :) thanks for the pm can't wait for the next part :)

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 3:29pm | IP Logged
Hi... This is the first story of yours that I read and I loved it...
How beautifully you showed the difference between Arnav and Khusi  and all the flashback helped in establishing that he was as aware of her as Khusi was of him...
Love your interpretation of Diwali almost kiss...

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