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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 107)

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
What a treat for us all - we get 2 amazing writers!!! Love the concept - there are sooo many iconic scenes and it will be nice to see a different take on each one! I wonder if you will both write your own pieces on the same scene - something different!!!
The first story was amazing - loved the way you kept us hanging until the end of the first chapter... And how it all made sense at the end!
The second story was equally amazing - loved the different angle of the Payal scene.
Thank you both for sharing with us and I can't wait for more!

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
first for the last update by expel...sorry i read it but dint get the time to comment so here i m...it was beautiful...yeas i said that i had a loads of queries and questions but m glad that u gave all the thing in the last...it was just like if u would have given us some of hints earlier than the story would have lost its beauty and charm...
loved that update,...totally bowled i was...

coming back to this one...Semanti i have never read ur work before but i loved the story...it was beautifully written and hell m so loving this idea of changing the epic scenes the way we always wanted to...

in just a shot u gave every damn feeling of arnav and khushi so beautifully that now m deeply in love with ur writing...

thanks for update n pm :)

so looking forward to read how u guys are gonna give us the best scenes in the best-est way possible...

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
it ws simply mindblowing! loved the red tale... icould easily see everyhing happening in front of my eyes ! awesome job people.. u two are extremely talented! write more soon...

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
FIRSTLY A REQUEST: can u please associate any other scent with khushi beside lavender and vanilla. plzzz trust me cherry blossom is a beautiful smell try it. a cherry blossom smelling khushi will make me imagine my self with that oh so delicious piece of cake i.e. arnav singh raizada..

a hire to a multi millionaire family yet opens door for people and volunteer at different projects ahhh try n not make us built unrealistic expectations. have some mercy on us single ladies, we are too young to die of disappointment. 

who could have thought that payal can turn in to skates only a brilliant mind. u took something completely twisted it yet kept the essence of the scene alive unlike juhi who took something and kept it as it is and completely twisted the essence of the scene.what a duo u guys are, awesome.




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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
I don't knw how to write bt u exactly write the kind od story which I love to read nd search all the times in IF...plz write more of this kind...jst loved it...sooo sweet nd cute

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
im left dazzled by this breath takingly beautiful tale!

it was just awesome and i had a superb time reading it and by the looks of it, i ll be reading it more than once!

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 1:49pm | IP Logged
Very well done ! Liked !

Thnx for the pm @expell.

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 1:49pm | IP Logged
Wow that was amazing and mind blowing one shot and i can't believe you were feeling nervous about writing. The update from start to finish was written beautifully and exceptionally well, loved the fact that they both had started to feel attracted towards each other. Awww Arnav decided to teach khushi to ice skate that was so lovely and he knew that khushi had a crush on him and decided to tease her further, awww the kiss was so beautiful and khushi biting back Arnav's lip to get even with him was superb. A beautiful and phenomenal update, thanks for the PM xx 

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