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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 100)

anumadduri Senior Member
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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 6:11am | IP Logged
One of THE best OS I have ever read !!!! Loved Arnav and Khushi ... Arnav as a ice hockey player is way too sexy and hot !!!! In general I always feel that hockey player emanate raw sexiness in all that gear . And imaging that for Arnav was way off the temperature charts :) loved a Khushi who is bold and knew what he wanted and go for it ... Their kiss was just mind blowing . This was was what I pictured when they would have eventually kissed had they got the chance on that Diwali night ... Khushi biting back Arnav was just too hot Smile also the humor quotient when Arnav questions her about the ice hockey was also way off the charts !!!!!! I was laughing like an idiot ROFL

PS  : you are a wonderful writer and story teller !!!


Edited by anumadduri - 17 April 2013 at 6:12am

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 6:13am | IP Logged
wohooo...great work dear...

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 6:31am | IP Logged
That was such an amazinggg update!!!

Gossshhh a personality like asr plus being an athlete, cant get better!!

Anh khushi so hard workin,intelligent n ohhh so shy was nice as well

Awwwhhh arnav knowingly askd khushi abt hockey n found it cute...owwwiiieee!!!

That kiss was sooo unexpected,quick and heated

Lol khushi being shy shd be scratched, infact arnav seemed more hesitant lol

Sooo well written n awesomeee!!

Amazinggg update!!

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 6:41am | IP Logged
Awesome tale Semanti!
You have a talent for thinking of completely different and unbelievable scenarios for Arnav and Khushi.
The tale had everything in it.A crush,longing, accidental encounter,and the too hot, amazing KISS!
I loved Khushi's ramblings (inside her head).
Arnav ki baare mein ab kya kahoon! Man he is P.E.R.F.E.C.T! Day Dreaming

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 6:44am | IP Logged
Awesome story...

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 6:46am | IP Logged
U r just amazing do u know that because all ff ars incredible
Loved the concept loved all tiny detail of it
Beautifully written
Love this arnav

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 7:18am | IP Logged
This was so AMAZING. Shocked I mean, some Production House should start up this 'Arnav-Khushi ki love strories' and YOU guys should send them this. And this would be super amazing, seeing Arnav Khushi meet in different ways and all. I loved it so much. I loved how you created a whole new direction of the diwali-almost-kiss. :') 
I had imagined everything as you had written it. Arnav a Sportsman and Khushi just a simple and a NOT so very shy girl. ;) LOL. 
Can't wait for the next one. ^_^Dancing

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 7:21am | IP Logged
Ur a wounderful writter and a story teller , no doubt about it, ur story was amazingly intresting , loved it to the core ,one thing which I like the most was khushis positivity , even during stressed and bad circumstances , BUT I don't like bold Khushi , I know most of the people over here r not going to agree with me , but I really really like my sweet innocent Khushi , so shy so pure , any way on the whole ur story was beautifully peened , well done dear writter. Looking forward to read more of urs and juhis brilliant piece of work

Edited by samirao - 17 April 2013 at 10:56am

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