ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* - Page 112

million thanks to meera for forwarding the link to this thread

hey my Paisa Vasool writer and Semanti! hie! 😊

My appologies first! ive been so mean all these days! 😔 I did'nt even comment once on any of your updates! 😭 Sorry hons! But i was sooo worked up! these 3 weeks were like hell! shit! i dont even want to talk about all that! But now.. im all free! and Im gonna grab a beverage and read all your chapters!
..waise i'll surely have a b'ful ride now as I can see you guys have posted so many tales already!
Im gonna have a blast now  

So, give me this night and I'll pakka se be back to you.. Love you two! 
Ciao! 😃

Okay!

..This is going to be pretty looong! I need your patience but kya karu.. I have a lot to say.. eerrr.. write! 😉

A TERRACE TALE 
Frankly, I never thought of anything even close to that! Shyaam's being Khushi's brother and that too a criminal.. not that I am complaining! 😃 Arnav Singh Raizada! he has a new profession here! an Intelligence Agent! *applauses* I mean.. yess! it matches his persona sooo well! Yayy!! 👍🏼 

Anjali was way better here! I mean i really love this lady! but in the serial she was so dependent over everyone! good one girl! 😊 

and the confessions! Khushiii.. you stole this tale for me! ❤️ yeah! I equally love Arnav but you were so determined about your marriage that I feel proud! 
I really liked this tale dear! it was like a fresh air to me! and yeah! the best part was.. Shyaam was Khushi's brother.. haha! 😆 😆

A TALE IN RED
Semaaantiii.. yeah! that's how I'll call you 😛 😉 ! I mean.. seriously! Havard University for the couple! 😳   waaaooo yaar! I mean.. imagining Arnav there is like..normal! but Khushi too! great! 👏 and I really like the characterization of Khushi in this update dear! she's a lot more stronger, intelligent and because she's living in a foriegn land! she looks more prettier to me with all those over-coats and caps! 😉 😆 haha!

I loved the scene where Arnav's teaching her Skating! read it twice! 😉 he looks adorable to me there! 😊 
and "Alright Khushi, let's see you run away now" 
haha! 😆 😆 This line clearly defines our Arnav! 😉 all the conversation there was fun to read!  and the KISS! aww! 😳 it was very well-written! 
..you writers are amazing!  Keep up the good work! 👏 ❤️


PS- i'll write more a li'l later! biiee! 😊 Edited by ShrutiPandey - 10 years ago

A Tale In Red :
Very cute story.
Loved the kissing part and the climax.
Actually whole Arshi moment was awww.
Thnx dear.
😊

There is something about reading "a tale of roads and raindrops" while watching the rain..listening to kishore kumar and well drinking coffee (pretending its hot chocolate!). 

A Tale Of Road And Raindrops : (Part 1 & Part 2)
Lovely story.
I loved it when Arnav smartedly had glimpse of Khushi when they exchange their seats.
And also loved the concept of sweet tooth.
Aww Khushi in red shalwar kameez, Arnavs fav color.
LOL sugar grains in petrol tank, amazed me.
Ahh I enjoyed it.
Still drooling. 😉
Thanks.

i love this anjali.. a much more realistic take and shes stronger too. that was something i always hated in the show, how anjali was portrayed as a weak woman completely blind to her husbands faults.  Edited by srujie - 10 years ago

a tale in red:

Ohooo something different is cookimg here heheheh lolz

.wowww ...the terrace tale is awesome...,,