ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* - Page 106

Oh goodness gracious!!!! You're making me take the next flight to California and wait for my Arnav to stroll along! 

Totally adored this - loved this Arnav and Khushi who are all about finding themselves and letting their emotions do the talking. The greatness of this story lies in the subtleness of how all those beautiful, meaningful emotions are described. I must say that I felt this story rather than read this story - so few words exchanged but so much meaning to the them. Well done👏 Edited by Amanram - 11 years ago

Beautifull... LOved it...😊

Fabulous completely loved it Edited by shaz007 - 11 years ago

Hullo!

amazing story, u write so beautifully, loved it😊

Didn't realize you'd written the third part till just now, Juhi. That was a fabulous rendering of the rain sequence in the parking lot. You brought out the thrumming desire between the two, giving it a new shape and a new direction. Loved this latest update.😊

Semanti, sorry I did not have time to comment on A Tale in Red, I have been very busy. 

All I can say is it is such a brilliant peice of writing. The short story is my favourite genre- it is notoriously difficult to write one as it has to capture everything in a short space, it has to be self-contained. And yours has done spectacularly so.

You've taken these two iconic moments in the show and given the characters and the moments a meaning that lies way beyond the show could manage to get to.

This collaboration has been extremely fortunate for us readers.
Thank you Semanti and Juhi!👏
Edited by Japonica - 11 years ago

oh,,,i loved all the works in this tales...reallly,,,, totally deserve the THUMBS UP for the brilient and fresh idea you all put in this tales and gives us the liberty to read and trus us with your work... hats off man,,,,,i reallylikes all your tales and also looking for ward for the next one which is due today...waitng