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Titaliya1234

@Titaliya1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

Beauuutifulll...i really loved reading it...both updates are awesome...khushi's nature s more lyk asr in ipkknd and arnav s lyk khushi...super cool!!! arnav having sweet tooth and khushi diabetes??? Hay re nandkishore!!!
Napa valley s Just so awesome...!!!
It has become ma fav spot...i wanna go there...thnx fr sharing...keep writing...

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amv63

@amv63

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Posted: 11 years ago

Semanti, once again you've had me enthralled.👏

Actually, Expel, Hiteat and some of the others have expressed far more beautifully what I'd like to say about this story. Wish I could just copy-paste what they wrote. But I guess I'll have to bungle along on my own..😉

I agree, the Diwali non-kiss was not my favorite scene either. I much preferred the unravelling-the-Diwali-lights-by-the-pool one. The unspoken desire and passion in that was beautiful to watch.

But I love how you've taken what is as important a festival in the West as Diwali is in India and woven the Arnav-Khushi magic into it so seamlessly.

A spirited Khushi, yet one who is appreciative of what she does have rather than hankering for what she cannot get or cannot be. A young, yet mature, Arnav who's life has more or less been planned out for him and one who "couldn't remember looking or feeling that happy ever."

Both characters have been etched out well despite the short story. You've taken so much from that scene and given it a completely different twist, yet you've retained many of the nuances that form the essence of what is actually an iconic scene in the show. And yes, thank you for THE KISS. I think we all probably said a collective "Finally..."

Perfect...you and Expel are ⭐️⭐️

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amus5

@amus5

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 11 years ago

res for semati's tale in red 😃

unres 😃

i know i'm ressing quite late for semanti's but i wanted to write about it before i write about R&R sorry for the late comment 😳

the truth be had that i missed reading semanti's as i was held up in other things 😳

anyway coming to the story

i must say semanti this is the first of ur works that i'm reading and omg i have lost out a lot 😭

the tale was just beautiful and the narrator actually transported me to the rink...i must say the whole world of arhi revolved,evolved and bloomed within that rink...i even saw that autumn scene from within the rink...and the whole tale just skated and glided smoothly within the rink itself ...there was just no chance of khushi falling down as whole tale skated all along as though it was floating on thin air 👏 ⭐️

i just enjoyed it thoroughly and was left behind with a gud feeling... 😊

i know my comments r just inadequate but kya kare itna hi mere bas ki baat hai 😳

dear semanti pls continue writing ...luv ur narration

thanx for the pm 😃

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amus5

@amus5

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Posted: 11 years ago

res for juhi's a tale of R&R 😃

unres 😃

i didnot want to comment on R&R before semanti's that is y 2 consecutive res 😳

dear juhi i'm at a loss for words...what shall i say ... both semanti and u r competing with each other to excel and give us perfect stories...i know there can be no comparison among writers and their imagination but i want to say that as writers both of u have captured the essence of the scenes which u r striving to depict and overwrite their wants...i luv it ... 👏

eventhough there is a role reversal those characteristics that define arhi remain within their bond...

the icing on the arhi cake was definitely aman...actually i was wondering what the... east or west SMJ can never change and how true it turned out ...it required the all time invisible loyalist aman to set the ball rolling between arhi...i actually enjoyed that part...it was just too gud ... i wud not have believed that all is well in lalaland if it had been SMJ in the place of aman doing the act 😉

anyway even for anjali to lead a blissful and positive marital life it requires aman and definitely not SMJ 😛...probably that is the reason why ASR has positive approach to life while khushi doesnot 😉 😆 😆

thanx for the pm ...pls continue soon ...awaiting semanti's 😃

edit #2

btw thanx for posting both the chaps together as i wud have been left desperate on their road travel before reaching their destination if chap#2 had not been posted 😉😆😳

Edited by amus5 - 11 years ago

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Sonia

@sonia_92

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

read the last two stories together. god, you two are gifted.
first the tale in red, that was mesmerizing, it was something out of a fairy take, it wasn't like Cinderella but it sure was a dream, a beautiful one at that. The fact that he was the famous champion and she the damsel in distress, was so magical.

then the tale of roads and rain, the intensity of emotions and variations within the confines of that car, was electrifying in the least. It was jusf thaf, electrifying. Gave me goosebumps, really, such silent pleasure. it was sexy, it was powerful, it was so intriguing, everything that went on in their heads. stunning

love
sonia

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Chochoo83

@Chochoo83

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

it was beatifulll... reverse of their charater from show khushi s like asr n asr is more like khusii...

like how they to starnger met n fall in love witheach othr

n the kiss was magical...

loved it

thanks for pm

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Juliet

@juliet7dead

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

Wonderful story... Sent shivers down my spine...

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

IF-Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

What the hell was that?!?!

I.Am.Totally.Totally.Flabbergasted... haaa!!! Thats just to be compendious about the effect of the tale on me! :))

I was completely drawn into it ...

If the chirpy bubbly Khushi that usually had absorbed us ... the Khushi you came up with was received with the same elan ... Absolutely loved it...

And what can i say The Arnav of your tale!? The name is enough ... isn't it? The panache he creates in our minds about himself whatever be the flavour of the genre ... is but incredible... so here too he did not disappoint us!! :))

Yes the role reversal just added to it on the whole...

All together i loved the concept!! that was a beautiful culmination of the far-famed backdrops from the show that had captivated our hearts much to a heightened extent ...

I would rather say the grounds that you created for the same scenes have come to become my fave better than the original ones from the show!

Ouhh!! did it have to end? did it really have to? i am so developing a strong pull towards Dhadkanien .. that i find myself stalking the thread more often these days... :)

Cant wait for the next Tale now! :)

That was brilliant Juhi ... Semanti..!! :)

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Summer99

@Summer99

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

Really liked the two shot
Rain, romance,passion. All the ingredients were well blended

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mrignayani

@mrignayani

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

Aaah...lovely...I love the fact that you incorporate the actual scenes...helps us picturise them...muah to both you girls for a such a wonderful job

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