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Napa Valley!!! Loooved your choice of location! What a setup for the opening scene trying to fool your readers with a gota wearing Kushi who has nothing in common with the one in the show. And Arnav! Role reversal and it worked so well because of the way you made it work! I love how he became Kushi Kumari Gupta and talked to himself. Loved the fact that this story was a lot from his point of view as well. Loved The possessiveness he showed when the drunk dared to approach her at the cafe. And she did not mind, did she that he showed the other guy that she was with him. Loved how she calmed him down too. This drive was way better than any first date. I was just at Lax last month so I was completely picturing him sitting in his car, thinking about what just happened and how he needed to get in touch with her again. The vision in red in his rear view mirror was so the parking lot scene from the show and one of my best memories of them - maybe even the best rain scene that I have seen on tv. Her innocent eyes and his naked emotions - not sure what he felt but it was passionate enough to make me forget he was the one to send her out in the rain in the first place. She went with her feelings instead of her dimaag and gave them a chance. Sweet! You just keep getting better and better at making your readers fall in love with Arhi all over again!
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