ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* - Page 74

Posted: 10 years ago
That was adorable...:)
The diwali scene is one of my favorite despite all the mess after that... I just conveniently block all tht out😆 
Posted: 10 years ago
ahhh...loved it
the kiss was amazing...and the story just beautiful😳👏
Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update...too good

thnx fr pm
Posted: 10 years ago
That was great really liked it
Posted: 10 years ago
Awee Semanti ji ❤️

Love Your writing!

It was so cute and Lovey dovey, dhak dhak waala update!

I was grinning like a loony in the ending!!

Love this Khushi and Moody Arnav..

Aahhh I so wish this was an FF 😆 I know loony moi 😆

But kya karu? It was too beautiful!!

Waiting for the next part eagerly!

Thanks for the Pm JUHI! 🤗

Love
J
Posted: 10 years ago
excellent...brilliant...loved ur story
Posted: 10 years ago
That was some Tale!! really! :)

i luuurved the concept!! loved the characterizations ... 
ouh i was all blush blush blush!! :) Man that was pretty fast i must say! pehli mulakat and it clicked like this * snap finger* 

so what next? KHushi Kumari Gupta ... you better be honest now...!! we dont wanna have misconceptions you see...
This is indeed a gr8 tale! :)
please continue and continue fast! :)

Thanks Juhi ... Semanti! 

Posted: 10 years ago
woahhh!!! lend me your fan too please!!! I'm burning!!! this put all my chemistry lessons to shame!! 

I can't think properly"!! still hyperventilating! 😳  

you killed me n sent me to heaven!! 

ab kiya kaho? 😆  I'm speechless 

next time you write such things na, please give me a warning!! I'll get my fans/ ice water ready! 😆  




Posted: 10 years ago
Superb...did not want it to end...just loved it...:-)
Posted: 10 years ago
What a treat for us all - we get 2 amazing writers!!! Love the concept - there are sooo many iconic scenes and it will be nice to see a different take on each one! I wonder if you will both write your own pieces on the same scene - something different!!!
The first story was amazing - loved the way you kept us hanging until the end of the first chapter... And how it all made sense at the end!
The second story was equally amazing - loved the different angle of the Payal scene.
Thank you both for sharing with us and I can't wait for more!

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